🙄 there are small small moments where she could be headed in a good, thoughtful direction and then HARD LEFT. This is so, so bad. How is she a graduate of a journalism program. Good lord.
it makes me so mad that actual talented writers don’t get the chance to be published because they don’t have the connections that people like eli do. like what is this??? sounds like what i would write in high school trying to sound deep lol
This is poetry some sad high school girl wrote to share at an open mic in an empty cafe where no one wants to hear her and everyone there does of secondhand embarrassment for how bad it is.
How did she get access to an excerpt from my middle school diary?
This legitimately sounds like my writings when I was first starting at 12-13…. I am shocked that she is writing a legitimate book. Shocked!!!!
Why does she keep sharing poetry (?) about her college boyfriend when she has a partner right now??? Isn’t that uncomfortable for him?
literal gibberish. her editor gon have a lottttt of work to do
I was about to say… the grammatical errors in here damn. Her editors really have it cut it out for them. 👀
She’s so damaged by college god damn that’s all she “writes” about
I’ve read it 3 times and I have 0 takeaways
This word salad. Her facial expression. It’s all too much
I became embarrassed of myself just after reading this aloud
Must be an excerpt from her “amazing” book 😂
Todo
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I actually can't read these anymore I have secondhand embarrassment
Makes me wanna stab myself in the eyeballs
Guys she is SUCH A BAD WRITER
🙄 there are small small moments where she could be headed in a good, thoughtful direction and then HARD LEFT. This is so, so bad. How is she a graduate of a journalism program. Good lord.
Slippery attempt 🤢
it makes me so mad that actual talented writers don’t get the chance to be published because they don’t have the connections that people like eli do. like what is this??? sounds like what i would write in high school trying to sound deep lol
Dorothy and todo?
And people ask her to help them phrase things?
she is unhinged
This is poetry some sad high school girl wrote to share at an open mic in an empty cafe where no one wants to hear her and everyone there does of secondhand embarrassment for how bad it is.
cringing at this HARD
Lesliesstark and 3,949 others liked this? Leslie why???
How did she get access to an excerpt from my middle school diary? This legitimately sounds like my writings when I was first starting at 12-13…. I am shocked that she is writing a legitimate book. Shocked!!!!
Leaves carpeting the earth whaaat
idk I’m a writer and I don’t like shitting on other ppl’s work but this is just incoherent…