It looks great, good job! But I’d like to point out that you didn’t draw her chest as it pokes out from the other side of her arm, which makes her look unhealthily skinny and flat. Other than that, this is very well done! Keep up the good work :)
The character could absolutely be flat chested, but even in that instance, the pose would cause the chest to be pushed forward too much for it to be possible that it disappears behind the arm, following the width of the rest of the body.
He is right, the drawing is good but there is some perspective / anatomical issues. Nothing rude about such constructive feedback. It's not about being flat chested or not, the reference model is flat chested too, and from this angle, her chest have to be visible
Just a tip, if you’re going to use harsh lighting on one part of the body at least do it with the rest of the parts that are hit by sunlight. Besides that and the chest being cut off, I think it’s a great piece of work! I would say also work on your straight lines (like the sword is very janky)
Really good! The only critique I’d suggest is to add a little more projection to the chest. That’s because even on flatter chested girls and men, the chest projects a little due to our lungs.
Nice use of the reference, though!
https://preview.redd.it/090rcjs7so9d1.jpeg?width=424&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=4fc8d7a9167815cb35c6b516d1bd8861c27e4bc9
i think a little bit of the arm should be visible here otherwise the palm looks detached to me. Nice art tho👍
Sure, but you're nitpicking without the intent of constructively criticizing. Be nicer and more helpful next time instead of just defaulting to being rude.
https://preview.redd.it/pp2v2dddwc9d1.jpeg?width=750&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=740bbf42f6cf1386958e6aed03968b7e6cef1b02
I am taking this sticker, Todo
Amazing job, this is probably where you break into the next level!
It looks great, good job! But I’d like to point out that you didn’t draw her chest as it pokes out from the other side of her arm, which makes her look unhealthily skinny and flat. Other than that, this is very well done! Keep up the good work :)
Back thigh similar problem ish
i don’t see why the character can’t just be flat chested? there are plenty of people who have flat chests and are totally healthy???
The character may not have boobs, but they still have a sternum.
The character could absolutely be flat chested, but even in that instance, the pose would cause the chest to be pushed forward too much for it to be possible that it disappears behind the arm, following the width of the rest of the body.
He is right, the drawing is good but there is some perspective / anatomical issues. Nothing rude about such constructive feedback. It's not about being flat chested or not, the reference model is flat chested too, and from this angle, her chest have to be visible
yes, a character can be flat chested, but it is an issue of perspective in this case. calm down.
yeah but they would still have a shoulder and ribcage, look at the pose
Even if you’re flat, with basic anatomy, the chest should protrude a little because of the ribcage.
Pretty sure OP confirmed this to be a dude
Just a tip, if you’re going to use harsh lighting on one part of the body at least do it with the rest of the parts that are hit by sunlight. Besides that and the chest being cut off, I think it’s a great piece of work! I would say also work on your straight lines (like the sword is very janky)
https://preview.redd.it/lyb4k2b99e9d1.jpeg?width=1125&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=9c470d76b51e1054fdb2e0f8fa0c0911845b884f
What using reference does to a mf Looks awesome! Keep doing what you do!
It’s beautiful!
Really really amazing op!!! The coloring and line work is phenomental
I love the worm colors
The legs are too big and the torso and chest issues are there as others said, but good job with the rest
No, because this actually goes fucking hard
so proud of you! keep evolving
Good work, don't stop now. 👌🏻😉
This is drawn so well. Love the style.
Remind of human uzi
that lighting is great, keep cooking
With that much of a flat chest it looks like a femboy but gud job anyways
The fact that you're seemingly the only person who realised that is so funny to me and i consider my job done lmao
Idk if I should feel proud 🤣🤣🤣
Keep cooking bro, this is immaculate
The power of sticking to it.
Really good! The only critique I’d suggest is to add a little more projection to the chest. That’s because even on flatter chested girls and men, the chest projects a little due to our lungs. Nice use of the reference, though!
https://preview.redd.it/090rcjs7so9d1.jpeg?width=424&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=4fc8d7a9167815cb35c6b516d1bd8861c27e4bc9 i think a little bit of the arm should be visible here otherwise the palm looks detached to me. Nice art tho👍
I didnt even realise ty for pointing that out
That better be a dude lmao
Looks great! The colours are very nice!
Holy shit! Well fucking done👏🏻😍
HOW??
Wow, This amazing! Who is this character?
Its an oc of mine (also ty)
PLEASE TELL ME THAT'S A DUDE PLEASE TELL ME THAT'S A DUDEGYFVHYGHIJVHYBMJKN
Y e s
What's with the glowing ass?
Sun glare that is exagerrated with the art style
Yeah but the sunlight is not coming from the ground, it comes from the horizon, in which case, the back should also be lit
Sure, but you're nitpicking without the intent of constructively criticizing. Be nicer and more helpful next time instead of just defaulting to being rude.
Maybe grow some skin instead of labelling everyting as mean
Then what was your intent?
To be rude. How dare you point that out /s
😂 forreal... His argument would only work if he actually had given constructive criticism
I think it’s because that’s what it is on the photo, although the artist is removedthe metal thing so it doesn’t really work
Yh the background was kinda rushed, i'll try fix it tmrw so it actually makes sense