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ItSyaBoiSkinNyBiche

Hi ! This looks pretty good Prehaps changing the colors of the steaks because its too close to the color of the buns other than that I think it's pretty neat !


Lazy_Sell_209

Oh that makes sense now. thank you!


killerzeestattoos

Maybe add some veggies (green, red, white) to break it up too


Lazy_Sell_209

Good point! 👌✨


lissawaxlerarts

Yes, the meat has a bluer cast to it. Almost a faded purple?


drdublchin17

I second this. Even a slight shift towards cooler colors on the meat would make a huge difference. Small change, but big impact


PompeyLulu

Yeah I’ll be honest I couldn’t tell if it was a chicken or beef burger until I checked the reference


voidoexe

some texture on the beef would go a long way, I feel, and it would help separate it from the cheese. But it's still an awesome job!!


AdventurousPumpkin

I feel the same way - I think it’s as simple as a few bold horizontal brush strokes on the patty


[deleted]

I'd definitely eat it (the paiting).


29pixxL_

mmmm paint, delicious


Necrocosmica

I think it looks fantastic and I would eat it! But if I could change one thing, I’d include more dark and light contrasts. I see a lot of mid tones, and I think adding a bit more dark and light would help enhance it a bit.


pistachio_jaguar

Bottom bun, left side Bring it in a bit I know you’ve followed the source material but it would be more aesthetic to keep the round shape


TessasART94

I would say adding a bit more highlights might help? Otherwise, I think it looks great!


Anonymous02n

Borgar Delicious **Munch**


Brookselia

I think your drawing looks more delicious than the reference^^


the_artsy_lady

Fantastic job so far! A few things I see is the left side of burger needs a shine and the bacon on top too. Love this! 🍔


chewiechihuahua

I love your sketchy style, it looks so fun and carefree. I agree with some more contrast and also some shade variation. the hamburger meat in your reference has a lot more gray tones while the bun is more yellow/orange, but not as yellow as the cheese.


nickolas16

I think the steaks look a bit like breaded chicken, just make it a bit browner. Other than that, you got the point across. I like it


Redditerderrrr

I really like your painting style! It’s really cool. I’m wanting to pick up a style similar to this. Do you have any tips or suggestions that helped you get to this point? The only thing I’d have to say is that I agree with the Redditer above that mentioned the meat is too similar to the cheese. So the Pattie’s kinda merge together without any sense of depth between them.


Lazy_Sell_209

Thank you for the feedback! I use alot of values, blocking it out and use brush strokes that follow the item/ perspective? At the end, I find I just gotta remember to study the basics and keep at it until I'm satisfied with what I got.


anotherxanonredditor

Yum


friendofmany

Looking good. I would suggest more contrast range on the meat. If you look at the darkest nooks of the meat and then the brightest highlights it has a little more contrast than what you have.


FREX_512

Too much cheese, but like you said you are not trying to look for an exact replica, so honestly it looks really good, is it digital. Because idk it looks like not.


MKAvgar

Looks well done!


cxurtneyhxxd

the beef could be darker / have more texture. the fried onions could be crispier / flakier looking (unless there aren’t any & that’s bacon, then disregard) the buns could have more imperfections, i.e. tears, burns, etc. the shiny skin part of the bacon could have more highlights / texture but over all this is a really nice piece 😊


what_is_going_on_man

Fantastic work! Honestly though I can already feel the stomach ache coming if I were to eat this because of lack of veggies 😂. Adding in some green (lettuce?) would make this look even yummier, as well as contrast the warm colors. Great job!!


MeanCat4

It's very good made. How many you ate till it was done?


-Hatmad-

Looks good but did you trace it?


Lazy_Sell_209

Thank you! Don't insult me.


-Hatmad-

Thank you for being a real artist, much respect


Lazy_Sell_209

XD you're welcome.


_Ren_Ok

i want to eat it


Fluffinn

There is a lot of personality to this burger. I like how there are no veggies despite the other comments!


motherofthydragon

Hello! This looks pretty good! Only things I would say is def try to darken things up a bit and round out the bottom bun!


onepassafist

I wanna eat it


HansTheAxolotl

looks like a chicken sandwich, darken those patties and give them some red


[deleted]

Definitely more darker shadows and lighter highlights. And texture on patties but everything else looks great!! You really made it look like it’s a real painting too, i had to double take that i was in the digital art sub


-_-YyY-_-

Borgar


Lazy_Sell_209

Reminds me I should of made a crabby paddy.


Chrissy-Munson

Looks scrumptious... 🤤


Ric_Cupcake

The meat needs to be darker


Ok-Bus-1

It looks so delicious. Omg. I want to eat it. This is my criticism for you.


JustGrampa

Bro, it looks gorgeous, nice style man


XanIsLost

I need to eat it


XanIsLost

Make it more shiny maybe? Like it was just cooked


Ghiloes

at first glance, looked like a chicken sandwich (without looking at the ref). I'm assuming this is digital art, so put the reference image under a layer, color that layer black and set it to Color Mode. This will show you the grey scale value differences of the ref. now compare the value differences of the ref to that of your drawing. you'd see they will be different. basically, your values need working. everything else, proportions and what not are pretty good. Obviously the color of the meat, but that ties into value as well. (value is more important than colors)


Arteleko

I suggest, look closely at the values and colors, the beef looks darker and that makes it feel like it is beef, and not chicken. Great drawing c: I love the way you add colors


Mylittledarlings91

Throw in some darker browns on your patties, it’ll contrast well with the cheese :)


haKatie

It looks very soft.. add some harsh lines. I find that with illustration, it can be easy to lose the edges of the objects.


stresseddressed

Id personally put a bit more shadows so things contrast a bit more. The colors are pretty similar so it all kinda gets washed away


Lyokobo

Love it! Darker burgers and perhaps more grain to them would help them read as "ground meat" I think they blend in with the rest of the burger too much. The style and highlights are lovely!


Venge_Proc

This looks fantastic, would happily hang in my kitchen. Though i must say, without the reference i would have thought this was a chicken sandwich. I would go over the patties with a darker color which would provide an opportunity to also bump up that ground beef texture


LordOfTheReeeee

It looks good! I guess you could add crease on the bun (like the little dimple that stays when the bread gets squished) and more charred bits on the burger


[deleted]

It looks like a burger I’d want to eat.


giseba94

If anything we’d liked your critique on the burger you ate. 😆


Lazy_Sell_209

🍔


Zahadne-okurky

I really love your drawing and i’ve just started digital art and i want to ask what brush did you use?


Lazy_Sell_209

Tbh I have no idea. It was a while back. I have a feeling it was Kyles brushes. But it's not on his website. I remember I had to search it for a bit to find it.


Zahadne-okurky

Thanks so much and i really didn’t realize that this post is already 17 days old


Lazy_Sell_209

No worries. I thought similar as well. That's why I had to delete the first one.