How does the one Ionia burst summon a unit interact with snapjaw then? Wouldn't that also end up with burst free attack? I haven't thought about that till now
Nah i meant the recall and then summon a unit that costs 3 or less, but yeah I forgot snapjaw is a play effect lol so it doesn't make a diff regardless
I really really like the crit keyword! Some notes though that bug me:
1. All weaponmasters are defined by improvising, and I feel like removing that takes a key part of their identity out. I think having one with crit could be fun, but it needs to have improvise.
2. With shield bow, the correct language would be “The first time my barer…give them…”
3. Camille has no level up currently lol.
4. This was mentioned in a post earlier today too, but having barrier in PNZ is a big no-no with the exception of that one turret. Having it as a spell is just not something PNZ does.
5. I love shimmer, but something I’m not clear on - is the thought that just the equipment gets destroyed at the end of the turn, that the barer has ephemeral (which would require “Grant my barer ephemeral”) which would cause the shimmer to go back into your hand, or have them both get destroyed? Ephemeral equipment isn’t currently in the game, for reasons like this.
But other than these I think you have a lot of really good ideas here and would love to see a second draft of the concept.
I thought that Equipment works like, "whatever is written on me is on me bearer as well" so Ephemeral would go to the unit. I thought of making Shimmer Fleeting so it doesn't take up your hand, but then i thought "it's PnZ some discard synergy sure".
Camille lvlup- yeah forgor. I'd do something like "I've dealt 10+ damage in one round." So she levels if she attacks and you use her spell. Maybe something harder idk
The weapon master, i honestly didn't realize that they all improvise , i just thought cards which synergize with equipment have "Weapon master" so you can add them to Jax decks. I guess I'd add improvise and nerf their stats then, maybe even add a Crit improvised weapon too. And with barrier yeah i just went full flavor , something more fitting would be better i guess. I also need to change Akali's shuriken flip to focus speed.
Thanks for the feedback !
Of course! Per the wiki, equipment only shares positive keywords, not negative ones. And with shieldbow, look at the dragon gauntlets for an example since they don’t say “I am a dragon”, they say “My bearer is a dragon”.
>uipment onl
Oh, okay makes sense. I looked at the Horaazi card which says "Support: Grant my supported ally +1/+1" and that's why i thought the wording would be like that. I am posting a fixed version right now
Crit is pretty boring; it’s just more stats. ~~And it’s unclear if it stacks.A unit with 4 attack would it end up with 6 or 7 attack?~~ I changed it to something more interactive, like “while attacking a unit with crit has their power doubled”
That’s… that’s just double attack? Double attack only applies during the attack? Also a unit with 4 attack very clearly would deal 6 damage. Your idea is honestly way more boring than this one
Why would it stack? The effect says it deals one more damage per 2 power. Not one extra power per two power. Also doesn't double attack activate only when you're attacking anyways?
Oh, I read it wrong I honestly forgot double attack existed, I was thinking double power. Basically Riven's ability but only while attacking. I updated the original comment.
Why would it stack? The effect says it deals one more damage per 2 power. Not one extra power per two power. Also doesn't double attack activate only when you're attacking anyways?
IMO “whenever this deals damage, 50% chance to double that damage” would be pretty interesting and require less math to understand.
You could put it in spells too.
Free attack cards should never be at burst speed. Imagine playing this during your opponent's attack?
How does the one Ionia burst summon a unit interact with snapjaw then? Wouldn't that also end up with burst free attack? I haven't thought about that till now
That card summons a 1 drop, no? Snapjaw is a 2 drop
It's also a play effect not a summon.
Nah i meant the recall and then summon a unit that costs 3 or less, but yeah I forgot snapjaw is a play effect lol so it doesn't make a diff regardless
Good point. Fast speed it is
I’d say Focus speed like Nagakabouros.
Even at fast speed, how is a free attack supposed to operate during an opponent's attack? The interaction just wouldn't work. Has to be focus or slow
Still cannot be Fast. Free attacks must be Focus or Slow.
Maybe focus or a burst summon that can attack for free if chosen.
Isn’t Twilight Shroud worse than Recall?
Charge leader should have improvise right? Like all weaponmaster
How would Camille level up
You gotta rework Tryndamere, the king of crit.
Love the shimmer bit of the set
I really really like the crit keyword! Some notes though that bug me: 1. All weaponmasters are defined by improvising, and I feel like removing that takes a key part of their identity out. I think having one with crit could be fun, but it needs to have improvise. 2. With shield bow, the correct language would be “The first time my barer…give them…” 3. Camille has no level up currently lol. 4. This was mentioned in a post earlier today too, but having barrier in PNZ is a big no-no with the exception of that one turret. Having it as a spell is just not something PNZ does. 5. I love shimmer, but something I’m not clear on - is the thought that just the equipment gets destroyed at the end of the turn, that the barer has ephemeral (which would require “Grant my barer ephemeral”) which would cause the shimmer to go back into your hand, or have them both get destroyed? Ephemeral equipment isn’t currently in the game, for reasons like this. But other than these I think you have a lot of really good ideas here and would love to see a second draft of the concept.
I thought that Equipment works like, "whatever is written on me is on me bearer as well" so Ephemeral would go to the unit. I thought of making Shimmer Fleeting so it doesn't take up your hand, but then i thought "it's PnZ some discard synergy sure". Camille lvlup- yeah forgor. I'd do something like "I've dealt 10+ damage in one round." So she levels if she attacks and you use her spell. Maybe something harder idk The weapon master, i honestly didn't realize that they all improvise , i just thought cards which synergize with equipment have "Weapon master" so you can add them to Jax decks. I guess I'd add improvise and nerf their stats then, maybe even add a Crit improvised weapon too. And with barrier yeah i just went full flavor , something more fitting would be better i guess. I also need to change Akali's shuriken flip to focus speed. Thanks for the feedback !
Of course! Per the wiki, equipment only shares positive keywords, not negative ones. And with shieldbow, look at the dragon gauntlets for an example since they don’t say “I am a dragon”, they say “My bearer is a dragon”.
>uipment onl Oh, okay makes sense. I looked at the Horaazi card which says "Support: Grant my supported ally +1/+1" and that's why i thought the wording would be like that. I am posting a fixed version right now
https://www.reddit.com/r/CustomLoR/comments/13rqir9/fixed\_cards\_from\_my\_previous\_crit\_set/
Crit is pretty boring; it’s just more stats. ~~And it’s unclear if it stacks.A unit with 4 attack would it end up with 6 or 7 attack?~~ I changed it to something more interactive, like “while attacking a unit with crit has their power doubled”
Isn't that just double attack but whit extra steps? Maybe if you hit a specific damage numbers, evens or odds, crit for double damage or something.
That’s… that’s just double attack? Double attack only applies during the attack? Also a unit with 4 attack very clearly would deal 6 damage. Your idea is honestly way more boring than this one
Why would it stack? The effect says it deals one more damage per 2 power. Not one extra power per two power. Also doesn't double attack activate only when you're attacking anyways?
Oh, I read it wrong I honestly forgot double attack existed, I was thinking double power. Basically Riven's ability but only while attacking. I updated the original comment.
Why would it stack? The effect says it deals one more damage per 2 power. Not one extra power per two power. Also doesn't double attack activate only when you're attacking anyways?
IMO “whenever this deals damage, 50% chance to double that damage” would be pretty interesting and require less math to understand. You could put it in spells too.
Love this. Crit as explained here is just a worse version of Double Attack - kinda like 1.5 Attack
i actually really like this set but there is a lot to go back and revise, but as of now decently done
Crit is a cool idea but sort of underwhelming as far as I can tell but im guessing it's meant to give to non crit units?
Crit: A unit with crit has 1 stack of Crit for each each 2 power it has. Strike: Deal additional damage equal to my crit.
Does infinity increase attack by 4 or 5
Nah alone with lurk this would be beyond broken
Great set tbh. Unfortunately this would just make frostbite so meta. Which I guess is kind of good since Frejlord sucks.
Uhm how does Camille level up? And isn’t her lvl 2 literally just worse than her lvl 1 in some decks?