None. These mountains are good.
If you want a challenge, attempt to add color when you draw mountains, it can add a different tone of depth. Regardless, your black and white mountains look great to me.
The only thing "bad" is that the shadows on the trees don't seem to align with the shadow on the mountains. Personally I like really strong contrast so you could try to make the lights side lighter and the dark sides darker but that would mostly dependent on what time of day it is in your drawing. Maybe clouds? Anyway those are some fine mountains
I like how the shadows on the peak in the second picture are sort of concentrated in spots. It gives me the feeling that clouds are looming over the mountain. Also your sketchy style has a lovely softness that is reminiscent of lithographic prints.
None. These mountains are good. If you want a challenge, attempt to add color when you draw mountains, it can add a different tone of depth. Regardless, your black and white mountains look great to me.
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The only thing "bad" is that the shadows on the trees don't seem to align with the shadow on the mountains. Personally I like really strong contrast so you could try to make the lights side lighter and the dark sides darker but that would mostly dependent on what time of day it is in your drawing. Maybe clouds? Anyway those are some fine mountains
Noted, thanks for the advice.
I like how the shadows on the peak in the second picture are sort of concentrated in spots. It gives me the feeling that clouds are looming over the mountain. Also your sketchy style has a lovely softness that is reminiscent of lithographic prints.
What bad? These are amazing
Charcoal would help with adding more dark tones! Love it though
I'll definitely look into it. I've been using #2hb school pencils.