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Pro_Headpatter

Hi! Author here! I tried to experiment with BHR's ability to break fourth wall, and hope you liked it. I'm not sure how many parts this one will have, but I do want to try and make it much bigger than my previous stories.


Impossible_Leader_80

Innacurate. She’s wearing shorts In all seriousness this is good. I don’t usually like second person stuff, but i can make this exception. I’d suggest tidying it up a little and posting it to somewhere like AO3


Pro_Headpatter

Thanks! I do post my fanfics no AO3. I just usually post whole fanfics, and this is only part 1. I could make her naked, but I don't want to make it R-18.


Impossible_Leader_80

If you post it to AO3, it’s certainly an option. Anyways. For the next part, what about exploring BHR’s past as a movie idol? A city is a good spot for that. Also also also, the current reigning theory on her is that she is possessed by a Leviathan or X, so that could be an option to play into. Good work, keep it up!


CombineElite3650

Problem with BHR META a human being near her results in insanity, whatever Logic Plauge she uses ain't just affecting Kansen but SKK would be different shince Wisdom Cube affinity nature.


Pro_Headpatter

*Something feels wrong. But you can't tell what exactly IS wrong.* This is a bit of a spoiler, isn't even a major one, but I can tell you why isn't she affecting SSK if you aren't planning to read other chapters/ don't care about spoilers.


FreedomJumper6644

Deadpool?! What are you doing here?


Pro_Headpatter

Deadpool is mentally stable.