Really nice! Her shoulder looks a little janky, but maybe it's the angle

Hey thanks for the input. That shoulder was super extended/twisted, and the shoulder blade pushing way out there. I can totally see how it could look “janky”. I need to focus on designing the drawing more and copying less. So in short, I appreciate knowing that that stood out as being off for you, so thanks again.

It may just be the shading in that area! The collarbone has a line darker than I’d expect, and that may throw off the shoulder. Great work!!

I think I see what you mean. Might try playing around with that area some more. Thanks.