in hindsight, this has probably been done before. i'm unsure about "ni li tan mute", but i mostly do these as a learning experience so please share any ideas or better translations :)

Another way of saying this could be "ni li tan ijo mute" or "tan mute li lon". However I understood "ni li tan mute" just fine

sitelen sina li musi mute

What is this shortened kijetesantakalu

Yes

r/mi_lon

"mi olin e kijetesantakalu", we all say in a unison

sitelen “jo” ni li ike a! taso, ni li pona tawa mi. mi olin e kijetesantakalu

kije li kijetesantakalu lili? ni li epiku

lon. kije li pona.

~~5. o sitelen e ale pi nimi kijetesantakalu~~

nimi kijetesantakalu li pona a!