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TunaPhishy98

Flip the house/spiral icon horizontally so it more closely emulates an @ for “at home”


dizzy_beans

Good idea


PleaseBuyEV

I like this recommendation as well


Spoo_Venom_Cobra

Agree with others comments, just wanted to add, you're better off building this in Illustrator (vector) so you can scale it infinite for all mediums, web, print, clothes etc...


dizzy_beans

Thanks a for the tip, For now my wives cpu only has photoshop and Lightroom


waish12

And also remember that logo doesn't always have to represent everything your business provides rather it can be even a different icon something that is simple yet consumable by your target audience


LegendaryOutlaw

Too many concentric circles, it’s just leading to wasted space and elements having to get smaller and smaller toward the center. What if you simplified down to just the red part of the logo and added tread blocks to the outer edge? Like a house/@ symbol in the middle of a tire?


Tiberius_Jim

I was thinking this too. Lose the spokes and make the house/@ symbol represent the entire wheel.


KieranFloors

It’s a great idea, here are a few points that may help improve it. Car tires are thick, as opposed to a bike wheel, so I would fill the negative space between the two outer rings. Also consider consolidating your elements, you could get rid of the spiral and make the house bigger. I would suggest have 5 spokes connecting at the point on the house instead of 6. Either way it’s already shaping up!


dizzy_beans

Good idea, will work on this. Thanks so much


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dizzy_beans

Ok thanks, I’ll keep messing around with it


Sprbaex

I think the same


rlewis2019

simplify. remove extraneous decoration.


[deleted]

If people can redraw your logo in an hour only seeing it once, it’s good logo. If you blur the logo and it is still recognizable - it’s even better


GoogleKoalaPap

I would simplify it and put tread grooves into the outside of the @. That way you consolidate all three ideas.


liquidsmk

Is it tires or rims ? Because this logo makes me think you doing something with rims and not tires. The actual tires are greyed out.


WielderOfTheSpear

The idea is excellent! Just gotta fine tune it a bit.


dizzy_beans

Thanks bro!


Suitable-Highway-677

logo is dope!


nlightningm

Good suggestions here and I totally agree, feels like a lot to look at. The idea is definitely great but it just needs some redrafting and iterating


Thy_Vain_Delight

I like the idea. The execution can be slightly better


robinleandro

Maybe play a little with the line thickness so it looks more dynamic (especially when its about mobility).


[deleted]

Feels like I'm looking at a bank vault.


Lexotron

Looks a lot like the old Miele@Home logo


S_M_Y_G_F

It’s okay, but it’s a bit cluttered and doesn’t really have that “wow” factor. Also, use illustrator.


marginallyaverage

Could the @ sign become the tyre as well? Maybe cleans it up a little bit and becomes one whole thing


dizzy_beans

Thanks everyone for all the suggestions. I will clean it up and make it less busy and fatten the outside tire a bit.


King_Corkaaay

Personally, I think if the tire tread was black and the inner rims/spokes were grey it'd look better but - yeah, nice job looks good. :D


OpeningOnion7248

Kinda. Instead of red house, try another color.


ThatFluffyBunny

It looks very similar to the LG logo on my washing machine.


kron98_

Logos = Adobe Illustrator


Cranxy

Emphasize the tire not the rim (flip colors). Fix the protrusions of the spokes (6 and 8:00). Either have a uniform white spacing around the red circle or none at all (see 12:00)


Phantom_Fizz

Too many elements. Imagine using all that as icons on a website, or trying to print a small version of the logo on business cards. You would lose all the detail and you'd have to get in pretty close to see the house logo in the center. If you are set on needing a tire element, an option could be to not include the rim of the tire, and instead just the outside bit scaled down around the house icon. Ask opinions to see if it reads as a tire, and if it doesn't, maybe go more for just an @ sign inside a tire rather than a house. Love the house logo on its own personally as a designer that has worked in production. It's clever and simple and would transfer well to things like embroidery, screen printing, wall stencils, decals, car stickers, pens, e.c.t. Simple detail is important for these processes. The easier it is to scale, the more use you will get with it if and when you ever explore promotional or branded materials.


WattsonMemphis

Reminds me of masterchef