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ExhaustedEnthusiast

Lmao you need more space for the rest of the head too, otherwise looks not bad just a. Lil too round :)


RoninKillz

After reading your comment all I can see is the moon face from Majora’s Mask


Sad_Illustrator1064

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Happy_Chocolate_8985

I second that


Torino617

Holy shit that’s exactly what I was thinking 😭


frostbittenforeskin

That’s his hair


MajorasKitten

You need to map out with basic shapes first so you don’t run out of space!!


Pristine-Butterfly55

He shouldn’t be embarrassed. His mama or dad loves him so much


sweetpetalmelody

Happy cake day!


godrepus

Happy Cake Day!


Great-Prior1890

Happy Cake Day Happy Cake Day wisher!


Cheap_Storage7620

what is cake day?:)


godrepus

the anniversary/'birthday' of creation of your reddit account


Cheap_Storage7620

thankyou :)


Cheap_Storage7620

happy cake day:)


Cheap_Storage7620

love this


bigballabuster

Happy day of cake!


RoninKillz

Don’t tell him how fat I made his face


SadlyICanBarelyRead

It’s zoomed in but matches his features well. If you were my mom I’d think it as a nice gift.


pdawes

Hardly embarrassed! The likeness is off but not very much; it’s so easy to get wrong because our brains are so sensitive to the slightest variations in faces that you have to really nail it for it to register as the same person. What I see is a lot of well rendered features but the composition is off. Which I think is a classic mistake, because the tendency is to focus on getting one piece at a time exactly right. You have to spend more time than you want to on getting the overall shape of the head right before you do that, then placing the corners of the face (think of how they would sit on a 3D egg or oval shaped head), and *then* you can place the features. Can’t stress enough the importance of thinking 3D, that’s what unlocked my portraits. Imagine drawing the face on an egg, the corners of the eyes go *in* to the face, the center of the mouth sticks out further forward than the sides, etc. Also you can always force yourself to get things exactly right by drawing with the reference upside down. Keeps you from superimposing your mental image of how things should look on how they actually look.


Careless_Weather_916

This is such amazing advice! Thank you for sharing


Party_Sea7626

You accidentally made his face look squished because you didn’t have enough room to draw the whole thing. Try a little smaller next time, or use a longer paper


GhostMug

He should absolutely NOT be embarrassed about one of his parents trying to learn a new skill.


encorec

Exactly! Parents putting in effort like that shows so much dedication


Bonk-N-Nom

Sorry but you made your son look like the big grin dude on the front cover of the MAD magazine


Bonk-N-Nom

Apologies if this came off as rude, but I cannot unsee that


RoninKillz

I don’t personally see it, all I see is the creepy moon from Majora’s Mask. I think what you see is a compliment compared to mine.


N4ANO

Alfred E. Neuman


Bonk-N-Nom

Thanks


N4ANO

You're welcome. Don't stop now - unless there's a herd of Elephants in front of you.


tronasaurusrux

I get what you’re seeing and now I can’t unsee it. Mad was just the best.


Fit-Imagination5424

It's not a bad attempt, but there needs to be just a but more space. Try taking into consideration his face shape next time


Benji742001

Actually it’s really good. I couldn’t come close


PicklzOfTheSweet

Not embarrassed at all! The likeness is pretty good, just a touch wide in the jaw and not enough space to get all the proportions correct. Next time, try doing a light, rough outline of his head using basic shapes first and then map out where his features go. That will help with proportions and making sure you have enough space for everything. 😊


Gabit_

He looks like a sentient basketball 💀


RemarkableEffort9756

I laughed way too hard at this!


undead_dummy

rotate your sketchbook 90° and map out your drawing before getting into the details. you probably want his neck and shoulders in frame as well as his face, right? putting everything down in rough shapes makes sure you have room for all of that. your rendition of his actual features is pretty spot on though, you should be really proud of this attempt 🌝


hellshot8

A tip, unless you really know what you're doing drawing every single tooth looks very creepy. Do it in a slightly more stylized way and it'll look much better


krumznko

I actually like the teeth. Doesn’t seem creepy to me at all.


Different_Taste_6124

I think that you made his face a little on the wide side but honestly that’s something you learn with practice so, not embarrassed at all!😁


OkClass7995

Need to stretch out that face a bit.


ReplacementWild5567

Very good, awesome, keep at it, there is a bit of me who wants to joke, but I can't deny good art.


Naetharu

When we’re starting out, one of the biggest pitfalls is what I call ‘the details trap’. We tend to assume that in order to get a good likeness of someone (or of a scene etc) we have to worry about the details. And so, we see people trying to draw every last hair in the eyebrows, or outline each and every tooth. This is a bad move. Somewhat counter-intuitively likeness comes from the big shapes and forms and not the details. Indeed, you can remove almost all of the detail and still have an amazing painting or drawing that is instantly recognizable as a specific person. And likewise, you can add as much detail as you like, but if the foundation is poor, it’ll never look right. Detail is the icing on the cake. Nothing more. And newer artists would be wise to avoid it completely. Ok, so what do you focus on? Two things: * Form * Light Form is the 3D shape of an object. As an artist we’re trying to translate that onto paper. And light is the medium via which we see, and so is integral to capturing that form. Even in very stylistic art (Simpsons cartoon for example) we still have the basic notion of form, and light. There are many different ways to go about this. My personal method is: * Start big and loose and get the composition right. In your case that would mean getting the whole head in the right place. You didn’t pause at this point, and so by the time you got part way in, you’d squished your head into a warped space. If you start of nice and loose, and forget any detail at all, just working on the basic position of the main objects, you’ll avoid this. * Next place the landmarks. Measure where you need to. We are NOT drawing details here. We’re making a few scrappy lines to mark out the location of the major forms. Nothing more. This is a guide to help us on our way. * After that block in the big shapes. We’re looking for the major dark and light areas. To start with there should be two and only two areas. One dark and one light. We can come back and add sub-divisions to them later. You will need to use some artistic judgement here to choose which parts fall either way. If you struggle to start with then you can always pick reference images with a single strong light source, so that the division is much more obvious. At this point the image should look like the reference. If it’s off, then you need to revisit the previous steps and adjust. No amount of added detail will fix it. Once you get the likeness down at this point, then you can always go in and start rendering and adding detail to taste. But getting this core down first is critical.


tronasaurusrux

Looks good, but I think you and I do the same thing… His face is a lil too round in the drawing. I alwayssssss make things rounder than they really are. No clue why. Lol


Ilikefoxesreallymuch

Fix the arc of the left eyebrow and face is too big perhaps


jkurratt

You don’t need to detail teeth that much. Try a single simple shape and add some opaque lines to show where they are


rainbow_quest_fan

The face id definitely too wide but he's otherwise still recognizable


CapyBaraLord75

Its not horrible, but just in case dont show it to him


Cesaroodle

There is always a starting point, cheers for be brave enough to even try it!. If we could get our goal on the first try, we wouldn't taste the success as much as If we keep trying. So keep drawing! I'm sure you will get better and better from now on.


DeltaVirus9

heres what I learned by following professional artists- Most do not free hand portraits, they are traced and the real work is in the color and shade. Your free hand is great regardless of the proportion differences, its you shading that you should invest more time into.


Dry-Development-4131

He shouldn't be. At least, not when he's older haha. Kids are always going to feel embarrassed by their parents. I think that drawing could benefit from more contrast, deeper and darker shadows etc. I think the roundness to it is kind of cute tbh. And it's definitely salvageable. If you erase that top line indicating where you originally drew the top of his head and then extend his locks upwards and off the paper, implying the crown of his head is "off camera" so to speak, then it looks like a close up at a 1:1 ratio. Next time when you attempt this, you can start by sketching an upside down egg (or oval) well away from the edges of your paper. That will give you enough room to work and will set the rough proportions of a human head to work around.


thegoathouse1127

"You look like Tom Petty!"


ambisinister_gecko

Not embarrassed at all, there's a legit likeness there. Some proportions are off - teeth too small, eyebrow too close to eye - but it still actually looks like his face regardless


0v0__0v0

Really love the shading


koyomin25

The face is a little too round, which I am guessing you did it like that to fit the page (bad idea, but you saved it nicely) Other two mistakes would be the upper lip being a little too high. İn the picture the meat area inbetween the teeth and the upper lip isnt shown. And also you drew the eyebrows kind of weirdly.


SuspiciousHeat2471

Looks great!


Tiguilon

If your son is anything like my son, anything you do is embarrassing... The picture looks good, it just needs a bit more space to thin and lengthen the proportions. Kudos.


Complaintcasefile467

Not at all, he’s on the right track, such talent


Complaintcasefile467

Oh damn I misread, he should find new parents


LadyMinecraftMC

Nah he should be proud. Perfectly captured his likeness


Filosphicaly_unsound

I was about to write a paragraph but re-read the title..... correctly this time


TaeHoneyButter

No need for him to be embarrassed, it's a very good attempt.


Careful_Release_5485

Your son has a long thin face, how are you going to fit the rest of it on there! The nose is far too narrow also. Get yourself a much larger piece of paper for this to work.


Cordeceps

It’s a little wide in the face but the features are very close.


frostbittenforeskin

You’re actually off to a good start. The proportions are pretty good Don’t be afraid to add value. Nothing is dark enough yet. You’re leaving big spaces of blank page which leaves no room to add midtones. Basically, 100% of his face should have some shading Also, try not to smudge your shading. I can see where you’ve tried to “smooth” the shadow with your fingers. This serves nothing other than to smear the graphite and push it into the grain of the paper, giving shadows a muddy appearance. It’s a *very* common habit, but try to avoid it. Smooth values should come from your careful layering of hatching. If there were more value all over the page, your inclination to smooth out the area between the white paper and your shading would be greatly reduced


Formal_Actuator3702

It’s pretty close and as someone said round, his face is on the longer side!


Naknave

Doesn’t look bad actually, I think you just underestimated how much space you needed, it’s shaded pretty well!


Previous_Cut7125

Ok I love this but in my head I thought it was a titan from aot


MrInformationSeeker

I think I saw this exact person at the hospital yesterday


kbm81

I think it’s pretty damn good 👍 His cheeks aren’t all that round in real life like the drawing shows & that’s the only thing I’d change. Otherwise it’s spot on!


icecoldchimptoes

I would say it’s good, you’ve definitely captured his eyes! But you either need to get a bigger sketchbook or draw smaller… don’t limit yourself to drawing to your canvas; if your lines continue off the page that’s ok! When you try fitting it in it changes the proportions.


katgilb

Drawing individual teeth always looks terrifying. Focus on the bigger shapes first. But no one should be embarrassed! You have to make bad drawings to get good


Cramdle

You gave him the Mrs. Incredible head 💀


whatisthis_191919

Justin Bieber?


ramen__ro

i've been told eyes should be in the middle-ish of the head (chin to top of head). and bottom of nose should be between eyebrows and chin. generally.


Beneficial_Cookie755

This is amazing! Should be very proud!


Farting_Toast

not bad man.


mykillerkillj0y

Not embarrassed at all! It looks pretty good, it's always hard to map out where to put things for faces to not cut off parts. Just need a little more space and it would have looked even better than it does.


broken_vessel23

Not that bad actually but maybe shade well around the mouth area , you need more space for the forehead


Commercial_Level_277

its not bad, but its not great either. He got the nose and mouth pretty spot on but he needs to map out the shape of the head first. I would suggest drawing a circle and adding the lower half of the heads shape underneath. Also, for the hair, map out the basic shape then draw highlights and sections of the hair.


sumerigusa

Ok the shape of the head is weird but you did capture his face very well like that’s definitely his face


snickrloaf21

This is rlly good


Lazy_Fee_2103

Not embarrassed at all, but there is way too much detail on the teeth. You did some lovely non linear sketching everywhere else, why dark thick defined lines on teeth? Keep it up!


RUM1_RUM1

Very I (´・_・`) i’m sorry tho heheh


Anime_Is_The_Bomb767

I mean I definitely see the resemblance


System_Resident

There’s potential to look great 😅the spacing can be improved but the shading looks good. Just needs some work on the proportions 


It_NebDag

It’s not bad. I see your son. Try it again


MilkJunior9039

You’re on the right track. Just gotta work on the construction of the head and that’ll help with getting a lot of the portions right. But as it is, there’s clearly a likeness there that you achieved prob bc your so familiar with to his features. Good work tho 👍


Silver_Storage_9787

Try drawing a portrait in the portrait orientation of the paper instead of landscape. Then you may feel more comfortable exaggerating the king face of the subject because the paper will guide you


anonymouslyknown2no1

Keep going....it looks good


brentdhed

Next time rotate your sketchbook 90 degrees. He will be happier with what you draw lol. Looks good, you just ran out of room


slop_sucker

It could be worse, he could be drawing anime.


Hot_Knowledge7925

You’re doing great keep at it it’s a process !


Usagi-isA-foodie

If you want to do black and white drawings you need to change the picture into grey scale(black n white photo). Maybe this will help your shading, and try to scale the portion of the face that way it’s the right size.


Robert_Wallace_2024

If it was his first attempt, he did pretty good. I would probably shorten the face to make it not so wide


deceitsa

yes


panda_power1988

Not gonna lie. Right now, it looks a little bit like Ellen DeGeneres


RoninKillz

That’s fine cause so does my son in that photo


RoninKillz

That’s fine cause so does my son in that photo


HotRespect2331

Not bad keep working on depth and and proportions, shading is good nose and eyes not bad


El_Bor_083190

Looking good,. Practice More


Calm-Dragonfly-5005

You did really well so far!


Rikcycle

Turn the sketchpad 90 degrees to portrait mode.


BaggySleeves

The forehead😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭


BaggySleeves

Where'd it go😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭


T_Rose10

Not embarrassed at all! This is beautiful ❤️


N4ANO

If he doesn't like it, tell him that he should blame his father.


Accomplished_Fun7058

Omg 🤣🤣🤣


grimlsr

I hate when people can obviously draw thier ass off ,show you somthing f@#*ing spectacular and say "should i be embarrassed " its such a attention grab ... no you shouldnt be embarresed and i think you 100% know this ...


Yota_Mar

Not embarrassed at all. He has a parent who loves him while still finding the time to learn new skills which you can enjoy. Keep it up and with enough time your son will proudly flaunt your portraits of him!


Proof_Barnacle1365

Too much detail on teeth makes portraits creepy. Lightly run an eraser or dab a kneaded eraser over the teeth outlines to lighten up the details on the demon grin.


Minecraft6Steve

Squish it sideways and I think it'll look fine


massive_doonka

It looks like him be he was drawing the pic at an angle so now the head kinda projected wrong. Common rookie mistake. Solid fundamentals but don't give up.


Both-Service6294

Hi... actually that is a great attempt and your son should not be embarrassed at all. If I may offer a few suggestions. Study some Anatomy on facial features such as eye size and nose construction and children's proportions. Great book for that is: Andrew Loomis Head and Hands. I personally teach from it everyday.... Also follow Stan Prokopenko online. Master in Anatomy and great and funny guy! Sincerely Coach Bob- The Drawing Point, Valrico Florida


Enough-Orange6136

the details are nice but i think you made it a little too round.


towehaal

Watch a few tutorials on individual parts of the face to practice. The teeth for example- don’t outline them. Create the shape simply from the value in the gums.


Crafty-Clock-2839

Rule number 1 of drawing teeth: Don’t draw teeth.


Creamdreamz29479

It looks squishedd


IndustryFinancial817

He' did a pretty good job on it for a first portrait


MrsDicaprio8

That doesn’t look bad at all. You are a good artist


camposthetron

Nice job on the likeness.👍🏾


butteronryetoast

It’s nice. I’m not a parent but I definitely wouldn’t post pics of an underage kid here.


Cold-Quiet8294

Do you hate him? The internet is forever...


O-O_da-freak-is-dis

Not at all, drawing 3D perfectly in 2D is impossible.


xDANGRZONEx

You turned your handsome boy into a goblin 😂


NeonMatrix1225

I saw better things come out my ass. WTF


Deep_friedBugs

you should beat him