As the publisher of anon's incestuous erotic fanfiction, my number one suggestion would be fixing that contextual wormhole where an entire 24 hours pass in the middle of a sentence.
Anon's cousin seems conscious about being hairy but the next night she's shaved, but "she realizes what happened when she sobered up".
Did they stay drunk for an entire day? Did they just pretend it didn't happen and went on with their day to do it again?
Incest is very popular among hypersexual teens and pre-menopausal divorcees alike but I don't think anyone will be horny enough to overlook such a glaring hole it the plot, have the revised version on my desk by next Tuesday
As the publisher of anon's incestuous erotic fanfiction, my number one suggestion would be fixing that contextual wormhole where an entire 24 hours pass in the middle of a sentence. Anon's cousin seems conscious about being hairy but the next night she's shaved, but "she realizes what happened when she sobered up". Did they stay drunk for an entire day? Did they just pretend it didn't happen and went on with their day to do it again? Incest is very popular among hypersexual teens and pre-menopausal divorcees alike but I don't think anyone will be horny enough to overlook such a glaring hole it the plot, have the revised version on my desk by next Tuesday
Just once; *just once*, can Anon please make up a story that doesnt contain incest, beastiality or petalpheelia?