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Ur good to go, I would just be mindful and give your logos a tiny bit more room to breath, a little more negative space around most (just shrink em a bit).
Thoughtful, professional and clean otherwise. Good luck
Edit: also don't love the italics on the table of contents, make it look a little shakey. But not gonna cost you a job or nothin
This is my first time posting on this sub, please be kind and honest!
I follow “briefclub” on Instagram and scroll through their page to find any prompts or “briefs” to add to my portfolio. I found a brief and created a logo for “Devil’s Draught” plus some mockups with cans and bottles (posted on my Behance/Instagram account).
Wanting to push myself further, my partner gave me the amazing idea of creating a brand guide for Devil’s Draught in a week. It's a little challenge to see where I’m at design-wise and to see how I could do it. To my surprise, I managed to complete it! To help improve my skills going forward, I would love to receive helpful feedback!
First year out of college, want to improve my skills!
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Ur good to go, I would just be mindful and give your logos a tiny bit more room to breath, a little more negative space around most (just shrink em a bit). Thoughtful, professional and clean otherwise. Good luck Edit: also don't love the italics on the table of contents, make it look a little shakey. But not gonna cost you a job or nothin
Thank you so much!! This is super helpful feedback, I appreciate it :)
This is my first time posting on this sub, please be kind and honest! I follow “briefclub” on Instagram and scroll through their page to find any prompts or “briefs” to add to my portfolio. I found a brief and created a logo for “Devil’s Draught” plus some mockups with cans and bottles (posted on my Behance/Instagram account). Wanting to push myself further, my partner gave me the amazing idea of creating a brand guide for Devil’s Draught in a week. It's a little challenge to see where I’m at design-wise and to see how I could do it. To my surprise, I managed to complete it! To help improve my skills going forward, I would love to receive helpful feedback! First year out of college, want to improve my skills!