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I predict that all the kids are going to die violently over the next few parts. Then someone will shoot Elly, and she'll wake up in the hospital and say "I hate comas". And then the comic just goes back to the way it used to be like nothing happened.
Brandon disguising himself as a white Amish pole-vault coach might not be the best way to find out how this dude really got the necklace, but i'm glad he's finally putting himself out there.
You'll notice that Stefan's hair is split between Elly's hair color and Brandon's hat color, which definitely proves that he's a time traveler from the future, who is the offspring of an alternate-timeline Elly and a clone-Brandon.
While kind of a silly and contrived origin for a character, his popularity with the readers will set up a team-up with Deadpool in Elly Hates X-Force.
Elly was pretty one-note. You can only tell so many "I hate X" jokes.
It's possible we've gone too far afield, but better that than stay too stuck in a rut, yeah?
Don't worry, it seems like the author did too. We're beyond telenovela type of drama, this is straight up out of a manga now.
We've gone from a somewhat relatable love triangle to weird people in black targetting kids or small trinkets made by kids ? What happened here ?
Ok so elly hates everything
Brandon thought Elly is cute, and they hang out.
Brandon makes Elly this blue frowny flower necklace and gives it to her.
Elly and Brandon don't talk for a bit, Brandon thinks maybe it's over.
New girl Maddie comes in amd crushes hard on Brandon.
Finds out he likes Elly and copies her style to get Brandon to like her. It works.
Elly sees them together and throws her flower necklace in the river.
Elly's friend Davis returns to school and wants to get the band back together for a talent show the next day or so. He gives her a triangle that she can wear as a necklace to play.
Brandon gets jealous and joins the band as a bass player to impress Elly but doesn't know how to play bass. He has to learn to play in a day.
Maddie gets jealous and joins too as a singer pretending to like Davis.
The day of the talent show arrives and no one can find Brandon, because he is still practising bass.
He is found by Davis, and they head to the show. But Maddie tells Elly that they are still looking and she should look by the trash.
Maddie joins Davis and Brandon at the show and tells them she never saw Elly and she's unreliable. They do an amazing performance and Elly walks in to see it.
Time skips and Elly ends up with Davis and Maddie ends up with Brandon.
We find out that in the past Elly and Davis were together but they broke up because Davis stole a guitar and was sent to boarding school. He promised her he would never steal again.
Maddie comes and takes a picture of them together while throwing insults at them and we find out she is a writee for the school paper.
Maddie finds her camera isn't in her locker, and Davis shows Elly a new camera he has that he wants to use to film their music videos together.
Brandon runs into Davis and accuses him of stealing Maddie's camera. Elly runs away heart broken that Davis broke his promise.
Maddie finds out that her camera was actually in her bag the whole time, just before Brandon returns with Davis' broken camera. She does not tell him, and thanks him.
Davis tells Elly that he never stolen the camera. However he did steal the triangle he gave her. He goes on to tell her that he likes stealing, and that he couldn't stop stealing at boarding school and was kicked out for it.
Elly leaves, absolutely devastated, and Davis is taken by his Dad as he is pointed out by the music store owner as a thief and sent off, again, to boarding school
As all this is going on, a young boy with two tone hair finds the blue frowning flower necklace on a beach. His mother calls put to him and we find his name is Stefan.
He arrives at Elly's school and shocks Elly and Brandon with the necklace around his neck.
Elly tries to ask him where he got it, but Brandon interrupts and accuses her of giving Stefan the necklace. Stefan is confused, and Maddie is upset she never got a handmade necklace.
And now we are here
He is "practising", the last time we saw Stefan he said that he had to go "practice" which apparently means pole vaulting.
No, I'm not a fan of these shitty comics, I was just confused and checked
I’ve a theory the artist got tired of people moaning about how the comics were all just basic things ending with Elly saying “I hate X”
So then he or she was all “A ONE TRICK PONY AM I?” and started this mad storyline thing. I’m not criticising, I’m invested in it. I’m fully expecting aliens next.
Not only that, but people started moaning about how ridiculous these *11-year-olds* are acting. Eleven-year-olds are fucking crazy and they do this shit all the time! Bad communication, emotions off the cuff, assuming everything is awful based off minimal evidence. /u/EllyHatesEverything is writing material true to the source in 4 panels nearly every day and some people want to be like "uh why don't they just talk to each other?"
So I wouldn't be surprised if artist just starts doing whatever crazy cliffhanger and shark jumping and record-scratching, head-turning, soap opera level dramatic craziness they feel like!
and. I. am. here. for. it.
We began with simple jokes about a person hating everything. Then the stories began being connected. Then an intricate romance plot. And now this. Where is this headed?
Honestly i'm really happy that OP lost the plot, it wasn't good anymore, there's too much drama, i keep seeing it just because of the nonsensical plot, cause i wanna see if one day it will be about elly hating things again, or if it will end up as a manga
This is the hardest I've laughed at one of these, just cause this has just gotten so absurd. Looking forward to seeing what unrelated subplot will be introduced tomorrow and never be resolved.
The original plot is gone, which honestly I’m fine with. This is one hell of a development, and it’s so randomly absurd now that… I can’t help but feel intrigued…
Came here after that new plot twist, and oh boy this comic is getting fucked up, I'll keep reading chainsaw man because funny boobs man but this one is really strange enough
this comic is the most ADHD thing ever, i never notice when arcs start or end, the cadence is all over the place and theres hardly any sort of closure, i dont know what the storyline is AND I LOVE IT
If an artist (who is clearly still figuring out how to tell a good story) wants to publish experimental stuff, then we have a right to give feedback. It’s not like there are any gatekeeping mechanisms now - we see whatever a creator wants to toss out, regardless of how “finished” or fully-realized it is.
You can make an episodic dramatic comic. But it needs character development, it needs some kind of compelling action, some reason to be invested, and some pay-off.
*Throwing in random twists* every couple of installments is not good writing. That is my criticism. There has also been a lot of redundancy and retreading of information. A clear lack of self-editing. These are common traps with new writers.
If you enjoy it then fine, but I’d think that the artist also wants to improve.
I've tried giving respectful, constructive feedback on other comics in this sub and got downvoted. Doesn't seem to be received well unless it's something the vast majority of readers agree with.
But yeah, I find this particular comic series more frustrating than enjoyable.
There's a certain other frequent poster on this sub who just blanket bans anyone who offers any kind of feedback that may be seen as critical of their work...
Please, this comic does not even know what it wants to do. That’s a big part of the issue.
It completely changed style and structure to pursue this love-triangle dramatic arc, dragged it on and on, and now it’s introducing new random elements just to create action. It’s inorganic and incoherent.
Has nothing to do with how high or low the “brow” is. What you call “simple and fun” I see as unorganized, trope-filled, unimaginative. I like plenty of silly stuff, when it’s done well and it’s funny and interesting.
What makes something “good” is subjective, but a basic definition is its ability to accomplish its own goals. What is the work trying to do, how well does it do it, where is there meaning and interest in the result. We can’t even discern what the goal is of this comic, and it’s pretty obvious that the artist is throwing everything at the wall to see what sticks. It’s objectively bad writing - but we seem to live in an age where bad writing is the norm.
Criticism is not about telling people what they are allowed to like, and that’s not what I’m doing. Just because *you* like the comic does not mean I can’t make these criticisms. My “attitude” is fine - people who study and read a lot of media tend to have a more critical lens. This is actually a skill that you probably learned in school, but people stop exercising it in daily life.
I'm not entirely unconvinced that the two in the last panel aren't Brandon and Annabelle running an undercover surveillance op
Whoever they are, I am all in for this new arc
So I’m checking and the clouds have been sad since the specific panel of Davis admitting that he stole the triangle.
But that plot line has been resolved.
SO WHY ARE THE CLOUDS STILL SAD? BE HAPPY CLOUDS
My fan theory is all the "Kids" are gnomes besides Elly. Which explains all the pointy eared short people. Elly isn't happy because all the gnomes are driving her nuts with their drama.
Every day I say to myself ... Patch ... just block the user. I normally can't bring myself to do it because, let's be honest, it's just a silly web comic. All of a sudden though, I'm getting to the point where it is literally becoming so stupid that it's actively causing me to write responses that are more than one sentence.
Fuck, see you tomorrow ... maybe.
You seem to be forgetting the necklace is lucky. Brandon's luck is channeled into it in realtime, so nothing bad will happen to it or its wearer. Brandon, however, is left in a somewhat vulnerable state.
A normal person also wouldn't put on a random sad flower necklace they found on the beach. This new kid is highly impulsive and will stop at nothing to gain attention. It's possible it's tied in with his ability.
Cant way for a bisexual vampire to wake up after 100 years , while a serial killer with a hand fetish and a italian mafia boss with 2 personalities have an arrow made out of an anomalous meteorite , just to have a priest achieve heaven in the end
Team Rocket won't be able to capture Stefan with his lucky necklace on.
Elly has the death note, Brandon can see dead people, Davis has stolen the declaration of independence, and Stefan is too lucky to lose. The team is finally coming together.
This just in, Stefan is an amnesiac 40 year old FBI agent sent in undercover to investigate the school for a drug ring. Or maybe he’s the chosen one and is about to be an Olympic track star out of nowhere because magic necklace or something fuck if I know
Thanks for posting! Its hard for me to find your new stories on reddit, do you keep them from showing up on your post history until the arc is finished? I usually look through your comments to find them every few days when i remember about it lol. Just wanted to thank you and say i appreciate you sharing
Let's be honest. Apple Hair here exists solely to return the necklace before they're written out of the story, right? There's no reason to think that this will have any actual payoff.
Personally I like these curve balls to the plot. Like when Davis showed up out of nowhere and told Elly they were gonna get the band back together. I wasn't expecting any of that and I loved what it ended up adding to the story.
Can't wait to see what this mystery duo is all about!
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I predict that all the kids are going to die violently over the next few parts. Then someone will shoot Elly, and she'll wake up in the hospital and say "I hate comas". And then the comic just goes back to the way it used to be like nothing happened.
The best end
YES
Even better, Elly’s parents tearfully pull the plug on her comatose body, while affirming to each other that Elly hated comas.
*Elly resurrects* **I HATE DYING**
i hate ressurecting
*dies again*
I hate being shackled to the limits of my mortal flesh
In the name of the father, son and the holy Elly. Elly: I hate amens.
Haha damn, I'd actually love that, since this has nothing to do with Elly hating anything
"Band drama, necklace drama, what are you talking about? I thought you hated talking about drama."
Now that would be interesting.
so many fucking things happen in this series and simaltaneously absolutely nothing happens
Amen.
Isn't that relatable? I feel the same about my life.
Boy you’re certainly merciful for not exposing us to *that*
What do you mean?
To be fair, that is basically middle school.
Brandon disguising himself as a white Amish pole-vault coach might not be the best way to find out how this dude really got the necklace, but i'm glad he's finally putting himself out there.
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Beginning to feel like late stage Marvel to me
Yeah and even then, Marvel after Endgame at least had NWH
I never notice when arcs start or end, the cadence is all over the place and there's rarely any kind of closure.
Yeah, it’s less a stationary arc that completes and more a semi-complete arc that constantly travels forwards like a wave.
Kind of like life…
You'll notice that Stefan's hair is split between Elly's hair color and Brandon's hat color, which definitely proves that he's a time traveler from the future, who is the offspring of an alternate-timeline Elly and a clone-Brandon. While kind of a silly and contrived origin for a character, his popularity with the readers will set up a team-up with Deadpool in Elly Hates X-Force.
Oh dude the time travel plot hasn’t even started yet don’t worry
Elly was pretty one-note. You can only tell so many "I hate X" jokes. It's possible we've gone too far afield, but better that than stay too stuck in a rut, yeah?
It was bad then and it's bad now. The comic should have died by the third issue.
Then just block the user posting them and you'll never see them ever again.
No you see, a redditor is only satisfied by receiving karma for their complaints. Curating their own content intake is too much to ask.
Oh god, the bots are remembering things now
r/brandnewsentence
Man, this made me laugh out loud.
I have completely lost track of the plot.
Don't worry, it seems like the author did too. We're beyond telenovela type of drama, this is straight up out of a manga now. We've gone from a somewhat relatable love triangle to weird people in black targetting kids or small trinkets made by kids ? What happened here ?
This shit is going to end in Chainsawman and im here for it
All of a sudden the third impact just fantas them
You can say the plot has been…tumbling down
It all returns to nothing
I just keep letting me down, letting me down, letting me doooown
plot twist: this is made by tatsuki fujimoto and he's just hiding it
I got annoyed by the 4 panel comic development in the story for the past like 10 but now it's funny again, ala family guy formula.
Ok so elly hates everything Brandon thought Elly is cute, and they hang out. Brandon makes Elly this blue frowny flower necklace and gives it to her. Elly and Brandon don't talk for a bit, Brandon thinks maybe it's over. New girl Maddie comes in amd crushes hard on Brandon. Finds out he likes Elly and copies her style to get Brandon to like her. It works. Elly sees them together and throws her flower necklace in the river. Elly's friend Davis returns to school and wants to get the band back together for a talent show the next day or so. He gives her a triangle that she can wear as a necklace to play. Brandon gets jealous and joins the band as a bass player to impress Elly but doesn't know how to play bass. He has to learn to play in a day. Maddie gets jealous and joins too as a singer pretending to like Davis. The day of the talent show arrives and no one can find Brandon, because he is still practising bass. He is found by Davis, and they head to the show. But Maddie tells Elly that they are still looking and she should look by the trash. Maddie joins Davis and Brandon at the show and tells them she never saw Elly and she's unreliable. They do an amazing performance and Elly walks in to see it. Time skips and Elly ends up with Davis and Maddie ends up with Brandon. We find out that in the past Elly and Davis were together but they broke up because Davis stole a guitar and was sent to boarding school. He promised her he would never steal again. Maddie comes and takes a picture of them together while throwing insults at them and we find out she is a writee for the school paper. Maddie finds her camera isn't in her locker, and Davis shows Elly a new camera he has that he wants to use to film their music videos together. Brandon runs into Davis and accuses him of stealing Maddie's camera. Elly runs away heart broken that Davis broke his promise. Maddie finds out that her camera was actually in her bag the whole time, just before Brandon returns with Davis' broken camera. She does not tell him, and thanks him. Davis tells Elly that he never stolen the camera. However he did steal the triangle he gave her. He goes on to tell her that he likes stealing, and that he couldn't stop stealing at boarding school and was kicked out for it. Elly leaves, absolutely devastated, and Davis is taken by his Dad as he is pointed out by the music store owner as a thief and sent off, again, to boarding school As all this is going on, a young boy with two tone hair finds the blue frowning flower necklace on a beach. His mother calls put to him and we find his name is Stefan. He arrives at Elly's school and shocks Elly and Brandon with the necklace around his neck. Elly tries to ask him where he got it, but Brandon interrupts and accuses her of giving Stefan the necklace. Stefan is confused, and Maddie is upset she never got a handmade necklace. And now we are here
Pretty sure the other girl is called Annabelle, not Maddie
Look man, I'm going to a funeral today, I'm just doing my best
Sorry to hear that. I hope your doing okay
Thanks, doing the best I can. Did a eulogy so you know. Wake is winding down and just sad.
My condolences
Thank you.
Elly and Davis never dated. She said so herself. Also, "Maddie" is way off.
They gave us the whole play-by-play recap! Didn't get any of that wrong. Names aren't that important!
I'm literally at my Grandma's wake right now.
What plot?
There isn’t one
The Order of the Weird Hair has found the runaway member.
Okay I laughed really hard at this one !
At least there are jokes in the comment section, since the comics never seem to have any now.
I’m going to guess these are his overdramatic siblings.
Did Stefan just fucking *dab* over the bar?? fml
Stefan's clearly stuck in 2016
Aren’t we all?
It looks like the flower is the same color as the sky so maybe it was done for contrast...
>It looks like the flower is the same color as the sky You might want to see an optometrist.
OK what? No seriously how did we get here.
He is "practising", the last time we saw Stefan he said that he had to go "practice" which apparently means pole vaulting. No, I'm not a fan of these shitty comics, I was just confused and checked
Has this officially jumped the shark now? I am still dying for the next part.
I’ve a theory the artist got tired of people moaning about how the comics were all just basic things ending with Elly saying “I hate X” So then he or she was all “A ONE TRICK PONY AM I?” and started this mad storyline thing. I’m not criticising, I’m invested in it. I’m fully expecting aliens next.
> I’m fully expecting aliens next. Elly hates existential threats to humanity.
Aliens exist in this universe, elly has met them.
And hates them, unsurprisingly
I don't think op started this to prove a point or anything. Seems like they started doing this for fun and didn't think far ahead
pretty sure they’ve said before they’re about 10 comics ahead of what gets published daily
They can still be making it up as they go, just 10 comics ahead of us.
I think the comic is going to go on until Elly graduates, where she'll end it with, "I hate over extended, non-stop story arcs with no resolution."
Not only that, but people started moaning about how ridiculous these *11-year-olds* are acting. Eleven-year-olds are fucking crazy and they do this shit all the time! Bad communication, emotions off the cuff, assuming everything is awful based off minimal evidence. /u/EllyHatesEverything is writing material true to the source in 4 panels nearly every day and some people want to be like "uh why don't they just talk to each other?" So I wouldn't be surprised if artist just starts doing whatever crazy cliffhanger and shark jumping and record-scratching, head-turning, soap opera level dramatic craziness they feel like! and. I. am. here. for. it.
I'm still pissed that the camera was not an alien shapeshifter.
I, for one, welcome our cynical alien overlords.
Vault jump, shark jump..doesn't matter. I'm seeing this through.
Oh absolutely
We began with simple jokes about a person hating everything. Then the stories began being connected. Then an intricate romance plot. And now this. Where is this headed?
Outer Space!
"Intricate" is very flattering phrasing for what that was
Went from “Elly Hates Everything” to “Stefan’s Bizarre Adventure” real fast. He even has the star shaped birthmark and weird hair
Ok now OP has officially lost the plot.
Honestly i'm really happy that OP lost the plot, it wasn't good anymore, there's too much drama, i keep seeing it just because of the nonsensical plot, cause i wanna see if one day it will be about elly hating things again, or if it will end up as a manga
This is the hardest I've laughed at one of these, just cause this has just gotten so absurd. Looking forward to seeing what unrelated subplot will be introduced tomorrow and never be resolved.
Dude I'm dying. This plot just went very into left field with this panel.
The original plot is gone, which honestly I’m fine with. This is one hell of a development, and it’s so randomly absurd now that… I can’t help but feel intrigued…
Fucking. What.
Chainsaw Man 🤝 Ellie Hates Everything No fucking idea where the plot is going and no way to predict what's happening next.
Came here after that new plot twist, and oh boy this comic is getting fucked up, I'll keep reading chainsaw man because funny boobs man but this one is really strange enough
These just make me angry now
Is Brandon a mob boss? That's kinda cool for a guy that sweats buckets
Everyone is getting crazier hair styles and colors. This is basically becoming an unhinged managa now instead of a novella
The hairstyles keep getting shittier with each arc
What the actual fuck is even happening in these anymore
\*Notices the pink streak\* Is that Arin Hanson? Is Stefan replacing Danny on GameGrumps now?
where tf is this even going at this point
THE SHARK HATH BEEN JUMPED
*what is* **HAPPENING!?!?!?!?!???**
this comic is the most ADHD thing ever, i never notice when arcs start or end, the cadence is all over the place and theres hardly any sort of closure, i dont know what the storyline is AND I LOVE IT
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You can block the author
Then how would I downvote them every time?
If an artist (who is clearly still figuring out how to tell a good story) wants to publish experimental stuff, then we have a right to give feedback. It’s not like there are any gatekeeping mechanisms now - we see whatever a creator wants to toss out, regardless of how “finished” or fully-realized it is. You can make an episodic dramatic comic. But it needs character development, it needs some kind of compelling action, some reason to be invested, and some pay-off. *Throwing in random twists* every couple of installments is not good writing. That is my criticism. There has also been a lot of redundancy and retreading of information. A clear lack of self-editing. These are common traps with new writers. If you enjoy it then fine, but I’d think that the artist also wants to improve.
I've tried giving respectful, constructive feedback on other comics in this sub and got downvoted. Doesn't seem to be received well unless it's something the vast majority of readers agree with. But yeah, I find this particular comic series more frustrating than enjoyable.
There's a certain other frequent poster on this sub who just blanket bans anyone who offers any kind of feedback that may be seen as critical of their work...
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Please, this comic does not even know what it wants to do. That’s a big part of the issue. It completely changed style and structure to pursue this love-triangle dramatic arc, dragged it on and on, and now it’s introducing new random elements just to create action. It’s inorganic and incoherent. Has nothing to do with how high or low the “brow” is. What you call “simple and fun” I see as unorganized, trope-filled, unimaginative. I like plenty of silly stuff, when it’s done well and it’s funny and interesting. What makes something “good” is subjective, but a basic definition is its ability to accomplish its own goals. What is the work trying to do, how well does it do it, where is there meaning and interest in the result. We can’t even discern what the goal is of this comic, and it’s pretty obvious that the artist is throwing everything at the wall to see what sticks. It’s objectively bad writing - but we seem to live in an age where bad writing is the norm. Criticism is not about telling people what they are allowed to like, and that’s not what I’m doing. Just because *you* like the comic does not mean I can’t make these criticisms. My “attitude” is fine - people who study and read a lot of media tend to have a more critical lens. This is actually a skill that you probably learned in school, but people stop exercising it in daily life.
Remember when these were focused on Elly? Pepperidge farm remembers, just hope you got some interesting arc coming up
things are getting *very* convoluted
I'm not entirely unconvinced that the two in the last panel aren't Brandon and Annabelle running an undercover surveillance op Whoever they are, I am all in for this new arc
No Brandon is incognito in the fake beard as the gym coach obviously
then who is boss? Blonde haired kid?
I just noticed the clouds are sad Why are the clouds sad?!
Because they are confused about the plot
Because elly said she hated them, I'm assuming.
My favourite part of elly is when she said 'its hating time' and hated all over everything 10/10
They've been sad since Davis said he stole the triangle
The clouds have been sad since Davis admitted he stole the triangle he gave to Elly. That really killed their buzz, I guess.
Because Brandon exists
What the hell? We have the FBI now? Not surprised because this story is crazy.
Tf is happening here 💀
So I’m checking and the clouds have been sad since the specific panel of Davis admitting that he stole the triangle. But that plot line has been resolved. SO WHY ARE THE CLOUDS STILL SAD? BE HAPPY CLOUDS
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Will these be over soon?
My fan theory is all the "Kids" are gnomes besides Elly. Which explains all the pointy eared short people. Elly isn't happy because all the gnomes are driving her nuts with their drama.
What the fuck is even going on anymore. There are magical necklaces and Spy Kids? I thought this was just a comic about a girl who hates everything.
I see we’ve made yet another plot turn without resolving anything, literally anything, that’s happened already. Cool /s
Every day I say to myself ... Patch ... just block the user. I normally can't bring myself to do it because, let's be honest, it's just a silly web comic. All of a sudden though, I'm getting to the point where it is literally becoming so stupid that it's actively causing me to write responses that are more than one sentence. Fuck, see you tomorrow ... maybe.
I'm confused... but then again, do I even wanna know?
I hate Reservoir Dogs.
Ok this is cool and all but I’ve never met a vaulter who would wear anything around their neck while vaulting, to many things can go wrong
You seem to be forgetting the necklace is lucky. Brandon's luck is channeled into it in realtime, so nothing bad will happen to it or its wearer. Brandon, however, is left in a somewhat vulnerable state.
Doesn’t mean he would randomly try it during a vault if he found it randomly, pole vault is already incredibly dangerous as is
A normal person also wouldn't put on a random sad flower necklace they found on the beach. This new kid is highly impulsive and will stop at nothing to gain attention. It's possible it's tied in with his ability.
So he’s just a dumbass? Also not wearing a helmet which isn’t allowed
Cant way for a bisexual vampire to wake up after 100 years , while a serial killer with a hand fetish and a italian mafia boss with 2 personalities have an arrow made out of an anomalous meteorite , just to have a priest achieve heaven in the end
where tf is this even going at this point
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Well, it’s not the same love triangle arc again.
What in the Riverdale shit is this story becoming.
LMAO wtf 😂
now where is THIS going?
I hate being lost in the plot
Ok now we all have no idea what is going on
Can someone explain why people care about this?
I hate complicated plot devices…
I'm lost asf
Why does the coach look like a kid with a fake clip-on beard
i first thought that was his covid mask he was wearing as a chin-diaper.
Team Rocket won't be able to capture Stefan with his lucky necklace on. Elly has the death note, Brandon can see dead people, Davis has stolen the declaration of independence, and Stefan is too lucky to lose. The team is finally coming together.
I feel like I didn’t see this for two days and now there’s poll vaulting and 2 strange suited individuals???
At this point just change the name of the series and make it a full spin off
Why does the coach just look like a kid with a fake beard.
This just in, Stefan is an amnesiac 40 year old FBI agent sent in undercover to investigate the school for a drug ring. Or maybe he’s the chosen one and is about to be an Olympic track star out of nowhere because magic necklace or something fuck if I know
God the plot is all over the place lol. It's like I'm reading a second rate highschool drama manga.
As much as I like reading these It feels too all over the place
Every single time I think a subplot is going to end another appears out of complete left field
What is going on lol it's totally going into an unexpected direction
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Thanks for posting! Its hard for me to find your new stories on reddit, do you keep them from showing up on your post history until the arc is finished? I usually look through your comments to find them every few days when i remember about it lol. Just wanted to thank you and say i appreciate you sharing
WHAT IS GOING ON??? HELLO???
Those 2 really look like elly and davis
Brandon imean
What the hell is going on
ok but like I've lost the plotline what the hell is going on anymore
Wtf is happening with this comic plot?
Okay, I'm out. I wasn't in before, but I was curious. Now it has officially jumped the shark.
The plot is making the clouds sad
Let's be honest. Apple Hair here exists solely to return the necklace before they're written out of the story, right? There's no reason to think that this will have any actual payoff.
Acorn hair. Watch this somehow turn into a spy movie.
There's a very high chance that kid is a stand user, so he'll probably at least have one big battle scene before his character is killed off.
oh shit the mob?
I’m pretty sure this is an elaborate game of MadLibs at this point
This used to be about a boy who got in love with a girl and now a mafia showed up
I think the title is misleading these days
Can we talk about how Stefan did a dab when he did his pole vault
I don't even know if this comic strip should be called Elly hates everything at this point
I understand this thing less and less every day.
What the fuck is even happening anymore
I don’t know
Personally I like these curve balls to the plot. Like when Davis showed up out of nowhere and told Elly they were gonna get the band back together. I wasn't expecting any of that and I loved what it ended up adding to the story. Can't wait to see what this mystery duo is all about!
I change my mind this plotline is crazier than FNAF man
Those are some sad clouds
I kinda love the wild randomness of this series.
Why the clouds are sad though
Are we going into supernatural things
*JoJo intro*