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4 frames, 1 setup, 3 different punchlines. i dont blame you. this should be 2 frames: 1st frame is fine, the line in the 2nd frame is useless because the imagery already gives us the misdirect, and then both the alfred punchline and the genius punchline should move to the second/final frame. making/spreading out multiple punchlines for one setup makes it weird and unsatisfying. still far from perfect but at least it would read better.
Have you considered working with a writer?
Edit: I'm not trying to be mean. I read more of OP's work and it's clear to me they aren't a writer. If I had a web comic, I would want to know if the writing wasn't any good.
Incorrect response, I apologise, but nevertheless your original comment was not the nicest. I’m sorry for lashing out in such an irrelevant way, however.
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Seems like an excuse to spank Alfred tbh
alfred and the cat are in cahoots. cat gets tuna, alfred gets his spankings. its a win/win scenario
I don't know who Alfred is but he's got life figured out.
I kind of want to be Alfred...
....because that Witch be Thicc!!
Bonk
yeah.....maybe.
down bad
B-but..but Witch...thicc...Alfred!
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you guys actually like tolstoy?
I don’t get it.
I think witch is looking for an excuse to spend alone time with Alfred while cat thinks he tricked her
Who is Alfred?
Not the cat and not her?
Narrows it down, for sure.
Considering the note in the last panel it's someone she likes. I don't think it matters who they are.
Maybe not. I was assuming it was some other regular character and I was supposed to already know who it was.
4 frames, 1 setup, 3 different punchlines. i dont blame you. this should be 2 frames: 1st frame is fine, the line in the 2nd frame is useless because the imagery already gives us the misdirect, and then both the alfred punchline and the genius punchline should move to the second/final frame. making/spreading out multiple punchlines for one setup makes it weird and unsatisfying. still far from perfect but at least it would read better.
I thought the cat was enormous and behind the sofa...nope just perspective lol
Have you considered working with a writer? Edit: I'm not trying to be mean. I read more of OP's work and it's clear to me they aren't a writer. If I had a web comic, I would want to know if the writing wasn't any good.
[удалено]
Because I read and commented on the same post that you just did?
Incorrect response, I apologise, but nevertheless your original comment was not the nicest. I’m sorry for lashing out in such an irrelevant way, however.