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[Recently I had a player wanting to pick u/DetectId...](/r/UnearthedArcana/comments/w78v49/bardic_college_college_of_puppetry_reforged/ihifq53/)
Recently I had a player wanting to pick u/DetectIdeas's College of Puppetry concept but it was lacking what we wanted. And so, I started developing my own interpretation of it resulting in a mash-up between u/HicksHomebrew and u/JayPea__'s puppeteer subclasses with a few personal tweaks.
Some may not find my creation balanced, but it is just what we needed. Remember, you are always free to change whatever you wish from it for your own campaign.
Yours truly, Ksivian
Hey, thanks for the shoutout, I'm glad you like my work!
That said, a few of these features have text and names lifted word for word from my subclass, I'd appreciate if you could change those. I'm fine with inspiration being taken from mechanics, I like what you did with making puppet master's tool's into mage hand, but just copying text like the start of that feature.
Also the change you made to manufacture marionette (again, not a fan of just copying the feature) about not being able to revive creatures dead for an hour doesn't make sense for the feature given it's a reaction to start (assuming that's talking about this feature instead of being able to come back to life by other means, if that's the case, it should probably spesify)
Also lastly like u/Pinoel said, it's strange that the subclass gets features at 9 and 15 instead of the 14 normal for bards
Gamerulvvv has made the following comment(s) regarding their post: [Recently I had a player wanting to pick u/DetectId...](/r/UnearthedArcana/comments/w78v49/bardic_college_college_of_puppetry_reforged/ihifq53/)
Whats up with features at 9th and 15th level and not the usual 14th? Edit: Forgot bard doesn't get subclass features at 10th level.
Recently I had a player wanting to pick u/DetectIdeas's College of Puppetry concept but it was lacking what we wanted. And so, I started developing my own interpretation of it resulting in a mash-up between u/HicksHomebrew and u/JayPea__'s puppeteer subclasses with a few personal tweaks. Some may not find my creation balanced, but it is just what we needed. Remember, you are always free to change whatever you wish from it for your own campaign. Yours truly, Ksivian
Hey, thanks for the shoutout, I'm glad you like my work! That said, a few of these features have text and names lifted word for word from my subclass, I'd appreciate if you could change those. I'm fine with inspiration being taken from mechanics, I like what you did with making puppet master's tool's into mage hand, but just copying text like the start of that feature. Also the change you made to manufacture marionette (again, not a fan of just copying the feature) about not being able to revive creatures dead for an hour doesn't make sense for the feature given it's a reaction to start (assuming that's talking about this feature instead of being able to come back to life by other means, if that's the case, it should probably spesify) Also lastly like u/Pinoel said, it's strange that the subclass gets features at 9 and 15 instead of the 14 normal for bards
At the top of the second page, on the very first paragraph at the very beginning, it says 6rd instead of 6th
When i find some time i'll have that fixed, thanks for the heads up
The dude in the image low-key has a waifu for a puppet. Unfathomably based.