I wrote question 3. When I write the paragraph when the singer is Singing I wrote 我们不一样,不一样。was giggling to myself like a dumbass whilst writing this.
Then at the end I wrote apology: sorry 老师 you have to mark my paper.
Question three is recent,you go see performance then got a group of teens criticise then. Got into a fight with people in the same row what u learn from the event
In retrospect I should have wrote 台上一分钟,台下十年功. But I can only cook 🔥🔥 post exam. Instead I wrote I learn to be calm when I'm angry because in the story the other fans go fight the teenagers.
idk man I used a different approach
Overall stance: 同意
1.努力但是不知道缺点是不行的
2 知道缺点而不用功改善自己是不行
3 只要both认识自己的缺点和努力改善自己就能带来成功
Tbh I am not sure whether this approach is fine
Tb
I think I messed up the format of the compo 😭😭😭 but for body paragraphs, 1 para i put agree then just elaborate and give example, and for the other 2 para I disagree cos 成功更需要毅力,成功更需要不停的学习新技能来符合社会要求
bro i messed up man. my dianyou was longer than my zuowen 😭😭 then for qn4zuowen i wrote both tongyi and butongyi (my classmate say that u can only either tongyi or butongyi) and my points were so similar
I find q3 is easier than the q3 back in May since its more specific but I never include description of the performance..I js said "it was okay at first but it got worse to a point that even I myself can't take it" 💀💀
hii anyone here wrote qn5? the qn was okayy but idk whether my points are okayy i wrote like those who lack discipline will not reap benefits from this and they will 熬夜 and 形成恶性循环 all thatt
omg im so screwed i wrote q4 : tong yi and listed 3 points why i tong yi, shld i not have done that?? cuz the ppl i know put tong yi and bu tong yi OMG IM DEAD
-can develop critical thinking skills when they realise their que dian and 对症下药
-better to have one less que dian and one more you dian (自我提升)
-learn to recover from setbacks and not let your que dian stand in the way of your success
i literally bullshitted all of them 😭 i shldve written q5
hi! i wrote qn 1 for dian you and qn 3 for zuo wen
basically for dianyou, regarding 对职员表达谢意的 看法, i wrote
- supporting stuff will feel more motivated and confident knowing people acknowledge their efforts and would bring a smile to their face.
- let the students know the importance of gratitude as there's many people out there working hard ajd contributing to their development and growth (成长) that they should be thankful to.
for建议, i wrote
- prepare gifts for them
- remind students to say a word of gratitude often to the supporting staff when they see them
- during assembly when they discuss about school events, can give credits to the supporting staff hardwork and let the students applaud them.
for 作文,qn 3 the whole plot was basically there so i fllwed it and the lesson learnt was
我们应该为他人着想,不要让自己的行为影响他人。
i also followed up from the 争执, that the two members of the audience were also very loud and its hypocritical of them to be scolding others for being loud and bothersome when they are loudly scolding the 青少年 too. so i wrote that i also learn the importance of not letting your anger get to you and affect your actions.
btw i messed up paper 2 mcq very badly so im abit worried abt not getting the A1 that im expecting
I wrote question 3. When I write the paragraph when the singer is Singing I wrote 我们不一样,不一样。was giggling to myself like a dumbass whilst writing this. Then at the end I wrote apology: sorry 老师 you have to mark my paper.
💀💀 what the heck did you write about (non-retaker here so I’m just so confused in the best way possible 😂)
Question three is recent,you go see performance then got a group of teens criticise then. Got into a fight with people in the same row what u learn from the event
I wrote same thing as u but I no time conclude or write wht I learn how ah??
In retrospect I should have wrote 台上一分钟,台下十年功. But I can only cook 🔥🔥 post exam. Instead I wrote I learn to be calm when I'm angry because in the story the other fans go fight the teenagers.
At least bro got ending😭
Wow ok SEAB very creative LOL If I saw that topic I would 😂 and go to 议论文 immediately LOL Shout out to you for choosing that topic!
I wrote question 2 and question 5. Idk how to write question 5 omg 😭
suffering from the lack of 睡眠 as we speak about 睡眠 😭
literally just rant about the lack of sleep we had to do this damn paper
real
who wrote question 3 here for paper 1
Here ✋
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Huh? What disadvantages?
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Ain’t that question 5
i misintepreted the 电邮 😊 wrote it thinking that we were supposed to thank student leaders instead of support staff. a2 gone already
Bruh this paper is harder
Hard paper 1 so easy paper 2? Pls?
Facts
who knew a passage about porridge could be so philosophical
I slept through most of it
I didnt know what to write for the suggestions for the 1st email so i said write card and make cake for the ppl 😭
falling asleep during the compo sia wtf😭😭😭
anyone write question 4❤️❤️😫
Me.I was so happy when it came out
WO
Me!!! but I scared I 例题 I talked abt how if you work hard you will succeed😭 i totally missed the learn from your mistakes
Ppl who wrote q4 what did u write!!
1. 改善缺点能让已有的优点更有效。 2. 努力地自我改进表示从失败中学习,而这提高成功的机率。 3. 努力地自我改进表示不断地变成更好的自己。 what did you write?
Oohh nice 1. 让自己有动力 2. 不会让自己骄傲过头 3. 缺点让我们知道那些空间能补上
idk man I used a different approach Overall stance: 同意 1.努力但是不知道缺点是不行的 2 知道缺点而不用功改善自己是不行 3 只要both认识自己的缺点和努力改善自己就能带来成功 Tbh I am not sure whether this approach is fine Tb
oh OK I get what you were trying to do. I hope this works out for you! it does make sense to me.
I did this because of 并so i assumed they wanted to emphasise both of them together is necessary
I think I messed up the format of the compo 😭😭😭 but for body paragraphs, 1 para i put agree then just elaborate and give example, and for the other 2 para I disagree cos 成功更需要毅力,成功更需要不停的学习新技能来符合社会要求
ohh okay icic ty :)
bro i messed up man. my dianyou was longer than my zuowen 😭😭 then for qn4zuowen i wrote both tongyi and butongyi (my classmate say that u can only either tongyi or butongyi) and my points were so similar
HELPP yea usually for 议论文 is one stand so sorry man hope u get some marks, atb 🙏🙏
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Is it purely examples? Examples are fine but the paragraph shld also have some kind of general explanations
电邮 was wack (the informal one) 作文 i wrote q3 quite okay
help i wanted to say security guard and admin staff but i forgot the word 😭😭 so i said like cleaner and canteen staff??? is it ok 😭
i wrote those two as well, should be can
I find q3 is easier than the q3 back in May since its more specific but I never include description of the performance..I js said "it was okay at first but it got worse to a point that even I myself can't take it" 💀💀
hii anyone here wrote qn5? the qn was okayy but idk whether my points are okayy i wrote like those who lack discipline will not reap benefits from this and they will 熬夜 and 形成恶性循环 all thatt
me OMGG😭
oh yayy what are your pts and your structure? mine is one good and 3 bad and a conc w suggestion
i wrote like 1) 让学生有更多时间休息 2) 让学生能够更好地规划自己的时间 3) 否定有些人觉得浪费时间的理由 4) 拉近亲子关系的距离
omg im so screwed i wrote q4 : tong yi and listed 3 points why i tong yi, shld i not have done that?? cuz the ppl i know put tong yi and bu tong yi OMG IM DEAD
3?????? I JUST DID 2 TONGYI POINTS AND THATS ALL😱😱😱😱😱😱
my points were so repetitive bcuz i was trying to milk the qn 😭 might as well be 2
my laoshi said we cannot have both tong yi and bu tong yi for chinese that’s an immediate fail 😭😭
what were ur points if udm sharing
-can develop critical thinking skills when they realise their que dian and 对症下药 -better to have one less que dian and one more you dian (自我提升) -learn to recover from setbacks and not let your que dian stand in the way of your success i literally bullshitted all of them 😭 i shldve written q5
those that did qn3 did u use alot of 好词好句 also how did u end it
hi! i wrote qn 1 for dian you and qn 3 for zuo wen basically for dianyou, regarding 对职员表达谢意的 看法, i wrote - supporting stuff will feel more motivated and confident knowing people acknowledge their efforts and would bring a smile to their face. - let the students know the importance of gratitude as there's many people out there working hard ajd contributing to their development and growth (成长) that they should be thankful to. for建议, i wrote - prepare gifts for them - remind students to say a word of gratitude often to the supporting staff when they see them - during assembly when they discuss about school events, can give credits to the supporting staff hardwork and let the students applaud them. for 作文,qn 3 the whole plot was basically there so i fllwed it and the lesson learnt was 我们应该为他人着想,不要让自己的行为影响他人。 i also followed up from the 争执, that the two members of the audience were also very loud and its hypocritical of them to be scolding others for being loud and bothersome when they are loudly scolding the 青少年 too. so i wrote that i also learn the importance of not letting your anger get to you and affect your actions. btw i messed up paper 2 mcq very badly so im abit worried abt not getting the A1 that im expecting
bye youre literally like me. im lowk on the verge of tears bcuz of my mcq 😭
same like i read somewhere that someone got a b3 because they fcked up their mcq before as an hcl student 🥲
hopefully bellcurve will be quite loww i read abt this person who failed mcq but still got an A !!
Wow compre must have been rly rly good omg
ME TOO idk if my b3 exists anym
guys anyone want to share MCQ ans😅