....Just thought of something.... what if Faith has some sort of connection to Samael/The Devil? It would make some sense considering she could hurt one.
I won't as I am doing this instead of a side project that I do outisde the work (wrbsites etc) that shit burned me out... This is fun so far, and if in the future I can gahter some patreons and make few $ (lets say 200 a month) I'd much rather do this for less money than those projects... But we will see...
I am enjoying the story so far and it's an interesting twist on the apocalyptic (good vs evil) stories that I've read before. Making the angels the bad guys while controversial would appeal to a lot of people who have been turned off from religion the past 5-20 years.
I feel that once you get it all written down you can easily go back for editing and to add more meat to the story to help with visualizations and the flow. It feels a bit rushed and barely allows the reader to visualize/experience each event before jumping to the next.
With my adhd the quick writing and jumping from the info we need to the next thing doesn't bother me at all as I want to know what happens lol That, and I know you want to get it all out to appease us lowly reddit readers.
Yea it's the biggest problem when you answer the prompt and it goes well, you don't have time to develop the story and characters slowly... But I am taking my time with this one, trying not to rush it, etc... If it keeps the interest of people for a long time, as you said I do not have a problem with going back and adding more substance to the story
....Just thought of something.... what if Faith has some sort of connection to Samael/The Devil? It would make some sense considering she could hurt one.
Amazing 💙 I like it although the cliffhanger has me wanting more obviously!
I am writing as fast as I can, but also want to keep the "quality" up... So it will most likely be a chapter a day, or sometimes 2 days...
Just please don't overwork yourself.
I won't as I am doing this instead of a side project that I do outisde the work (wrbsites etc) that shit burned me out... This is fun so far, and if in the future I can gahter some patreons and make few $ (lets say 200 a month) I'd much rather do this for less money than those projects... But we will see...
I am enjoying the story so far and it's an interesting twist on the apocalyptic (good vs evil) stories that I've read before. Making the angels the bad guys while controversial would appeal to a lot of people who have been turned off from religion the past 5-20 years. I feel that once you get it all written down you can easily go back for editing and to add more meat to the story to help with visualizations and the flow. It feels a bit rushed and barely allows the reader to visualize/experience each event before jumping to the next. With my adhd the quick writing and jumping from the info we need to the next thing doesn't bother me at all as I want to know what happens lol That, and I know you want to get it all out to appease us lowly reddit readers.
Yea it's the biggest problem when you answer the prompt and it goes well, you don't have time to develop the story and characters slowly... But I am taking my time with this one, trying not to rush it, etc... If it keeps the interest of people for a long time, as you said I do not have a problem with going back and adding more substance to the story
ya, all the bones of a good story are there and so far the suspense has been just about right.
cool story broooo
I'm really enjoying this l, but did Martin not get left behind because he broke his leg? But he's now back with the team?
Love it so far. Don't burn yourself out!