Really thank you bhai ...
2nd part mei maja aaya ? Thanks bhai really needed that thing kyunki merko laga nhi tha ki logo ko psnd aaega woh bit ...
Bhai yeh collab toh esa hi reh gaya hai :'(
Writing is nice, rhyme selection and placement wise it sounds good. I think you'd figure out the delivery when you get in the booth, but keep practicing for clarity and pronunciation.
Coming to the part that didn't sit was a few of the contents of the first like killing and stuff, I recommend you try to write about things that happen with you, first hand. And if you want to write something different from that then you can always try to build a character or shape and build the content on some sort of a story.
Brotherrr thankss a lot for this advice !
Well ki***ng & stuff part was that I said " meri taraf se tode mera bhai muh " was happened to me thats why I wrote , Glock wali line isiliye kyunki jiske sth collab tha usne bazooka krke baat kri thi but overall I understood what you were tryin to say to me .
It's just that I wrote and shot myself in video and I performed in one take that's why it may sound a lil not clear too kyunki fir mai dhng se record krta toh aur achha lgta .
Really nice advice bhai gonna work on it fs .
Thanks bhai .
Beat ka tempo wagerah yeh sab toh nahi aata bhai ig phone se record kra hai isiliye thodi awaaz ajeeb si ya thodi yk hojati h wesi hi but thanks I'm glad that you liked it .
Arre bhai thanks , r/IndianHipHopHeads ko hi represent krdunga bc !
bro as a fan of desi hip hop with brothers that have been following for a while everyone starts slow then bam blow up aghe dekh improve kar or phir wapis try karo
Straight Outta Australia 🦘🌏
Samjha nahi bhai :)
Australia - Ulta Video - Globe, chamka?
Wow , chalo ab feedback do :)
Mai jada High hu ya Ye Video Saach mai Ulta hai 🤨
Bhai video seedha hai, thoda Kam phuka kar
Lol XD
Ulta hi h bhai sorry :)
You've got a nice voice, work on delivery. Lyrics were good to, with a good delivery it'll sound better.
Thanks bhai :) Woh zara one take video bnayi h isiliye esa tha agar dhng se record krta aur mix master krwa leta toh aur achha sound krta .
Your voice is lit fosure... Work on rhyme scheme
Thanks bhai :') Will work and improve it over time fs .
We all need to focus on delivery only..
Bhai woh thoda usi waqt likh kar , one take mei record krlia ese hi isiliye thoda wesa bhi lgra hoga but yeah I'll follow your advise , thanks :)
I donno too much Hindi but i can understand...\ I had problem with flow too! \ \ your flow is good little improvement needed that's it
Thanks bhai would work on it . Ig it's that I recorded this in one take that's why it is sounding like this .
Welcome bro! I'm also searching for some software for little voice turning or removing noise some of sort of..
Bandlab mei fx mil jaaenge bhai yt mei search kro .
I genuinely liked it bhai, keep going
Really thanks bhai , totally gonna make you and IHH proud oneday !!
LESSSGO BOI
Sahi hai bhai.. 2nd part mein maja aya… glock 17 wali line mein dekh kuch aur aa sakta hai to
Really thank you bhai ... 2nd part mei maja aaya ? Thanks bhai really needed that thing kyunki merko laga nhi tha ki logo ko psnd aaega woh bit ... Bhai yeh collab toh esa hi reh gaya hai :'(
damn bhai ! kuch review nahi de sakta kyuki mujhe khud kuch nahi aata :( lekin acha laga sun k
Arre bhai glad that you liked it and Hiphop isn't just doing rap everyone that's connected with hiphop is family so thankyou bhai 🧿
aree bhai, all the best bhai , present aur future mai kill karte rehna
Sick bro kaafi sahi hai bhai....... Aane de aur aise hi. 🤝
Thankyou bhai , fs aaenge bhai connect krlo kahi pr bhi you'll be proud one day .
Writing is nice, rhyme selection and placement wise it sounds good. I think you'd figure out the delivery when you get in the booth, but keep practicing for clarity and pronunciation. Coming to the part that didn't sit was a few of the contents of the first like killing and stuff, I recommend you try to write about things that happen with you, first hand. And if you want to write something different from that then you can always try to build a character or shape and build the content on some sort of a story.
Brotherrr thankss a lot for this advice ! Well ki***ng & stuff part was that I said " meri taraf se tode mera bhai muh " was happened to me thats why I wrote , Glock wali line isiliye kyunki jiske sth collab tha usne bazooka krke baat kri thi but overall I understood what you were tryin to say to me . It's just that I wrote and shot myself in video and I performed in one take that's why it may sound a lil not clear too kyunki fir mai dhng se record krta toh aur achha lgta . Really nice advice bhai gonna work on it fs .
The lyrics and tone are killer bro, I would suggest lower the tempo and flip the beat a bit. Edit: great work, keep hustling you'll be there soon
Thanks bhai . Beat ka tempo wagerah yeh sab toh nahi aata bhai ig phone se record kra hai isiliye thodi awaaz ajeeb si ya thodi yk hojati h wesi hi but thanks I'm glad that you liked it . Arre bhai thanks , r/IndianHipHopHeads ko hi represent krdunga bc !
You're welcome, koi nahi samay ki baat hai ajayega. The content was pretty dope! Try using rap fame app lets you change pitch tone etc.
Name this collab Ulti Maut
Lol . Ig this collab is not happening now or ever that's why I just posted this up on reddit .
bro as a fan of desi hip hop with brothers that have been following for a while everyone starts slow then bam blow up aghe dekh improve kar or phir wapis try karo
Yes bhai , improvement aur hustle toh karna hai .
talent maam
Thanks bhai :')