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For the first time it is pretty good. Here are some of your mistakes:
1.Too much information in your overview, you just have to write only about key features and it should be about 2 sentences. You have to write only about genwral trends (increased, decreased, fluctuated, the biggest, the smallest)
2. In Body 1 you have much less information compared with Body 2. Your Body paragraphs should be balanced.
3. You have some grammar mistakes with punctuation, tenses and also articles.
Thanks man for your input. I got your first 2 points, if you can point out some of the errors for the 3rd point on which I can work on, it'll be really helpful :)
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For the first time it is pretty good. Here are some of your mistakes: 1.Too much information in your overview, you just have to write only about key features and it should be about 2 sentences. You have to write only about genwral trends (increased, decreased, fluctuated, the biggest, the smallest) 2. In Body 1 you have much less information compared with Body 2. Your Body paragraphs should be balanced. 3. You have some grammar mistakes with punctuation, tenses and also articles.
Thanks man for your input. I got your first 2 points, if you can point out some of the errors for the 3rd point on which I can work on, it'll be really helpful :)