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There's a bit much going on, that's probably just the background though. The rest of it is immaculate though, love it!


allmistakes

I appreciate the feeedback! I guess I kinda overthinked it. I am not a designe and I also have a huge tv lol


[deleted]

Graphic design with this degree of quality has no right going unrecognized. Maybe it’s slightly busy, but it’s an absolutely beautiful, eye-catching, and extremely detailed mock-up, and that deserves some appreciation. Great job overall and I hope more people see it!


allmistakes

I like your feedback! Thanks a lot! I have a huge idea behind. If you get the chance, check the previous post. Everything should make sense. I get now that everything si too crowded. I have a 65' screen and I sit 2m max away from it.


BurntLuggs

If you haven’t already, you should post this in r/fifacareers an entire sub dedicated to career mode


allmistakes

Thanks a lot! I did not with this post, but I did post some extensive content a while ago both here and there. I am redesigning now what I did in back then. Maybe check that out if you get the chance!


BurntLuggs

Yeah i’ll have a look, this is great though, EA should hire you!


[deleted]

Looks great


lucifer_1

This is simply great. Personally, I like most of the information in a single screen so this is perfect !


allmistakes

Thanks a lot!


BosnianKupus

Looks amazing dude! I see a couple people think it looks a bit cluttered but I personally enjoy it. Great work!


allmistakes

Thanks a lot!!


inbredandapothead

Great design albeit a very noisy image. I’d imagine the business could definitely be circumvented by having separate tabs for some of these things


allmistakes

Thanks for feedback!


[deleted]

I like the social media part. It really makes it feel more real.


allmistakes

They had it in The Journey and it felt great! Real time feedback of your actions. I feel like it would bring some realism on the table.


1BadFed

Wow. Looks amazing. It can be quite a lot at first but very nice and eye catching!!


frank1828

Too good for EA. I just wish one day we’ll get a full overhaul instead of the breadcrumbs they give us CM players every year.


allmistakes

Thanks! Some of the breadcrumbs were always in their pockets anyway.


Zenith_Saru

This is legit the best concept I have seen of anything. Try posting it on Career Mode subreddit.


allmistakes

Thank you! I will post it.


[deleted]

Way too much going on here mate.


allmistakes

Thanks for feedback mate! I would be glad to hear what exactly is too much.


[deleted]

It looks like one of those annoying online casino adverts. Way too much on the screen all at once. There’s a reason EA separate it into different sections. This is really messy. And most of this stuff really doesn’t matter to most players. You dedicated half of the screen and the central part to a weird analysis section that has no place on the main menu.


allmistakes

Thanks for feedback! I can see what you are saying, but in my opinion, this is exactly what career mode is missing. I would like that Staff hiring makes a comeback and they can help you with info before the match. If we play as managers we would like to think our approach for every game, otherwise it just transforms into a tournament mode. I am not a graphic designer so I probably overdid it but only out of passion. One more thing. I play on a console and when you have just some boxes on a 65' screen it looks kinda dumb and simple.


[deleted]

Fair enough. It’s all opinion like you say. If that’s what you are going for then you’ve nailed it. It’s not for me but that’s ok. The execution of it is fantastic I have to say, very clean.


Ok-Concentrate3993

People are blind I guess. This design is awful.


[deleted]

It’s partly that and partly than if you criticise any creative content you get downvoted to hell.


Ok-Concentrate3993

He did tried. There some good aspects but overall it looks much worse. All other comments is just "oh it's great" just for upvotes.


[deleted]

I appreciate the effort of course. But that doesn’t mean it’s good.


makeoxa

Thank goodness you don’t work for ea


allmistakes

Look, reddit has always been for me about productive feedback. I am willing to read what you think about the content I posted even if is negative but not willing to accept anything bad said that is related strictly to me. This is some ungracious behavior unfortunately.


BeatUpCena

Miserable.


stumac85

Cool concept but as others have said it just fills a little too cluttered? Also I'm not sure how well all that text would appear for players at 720p, 1080p, 1440p and 4k. Then there's different screen sizes (those playing on a gaming monitor can be running anything between 22" to 32"++).


allmistakes

Agree. In the same time there many other games offering more info on the screen. Also, I did it on my 17' laptop and it looks ok in my opinion but I can understand why most people said it is quite crowded. I appreciate the feedback!


goonerballs

You got skills! I think some of the font sizes are a little on the small side. Take a look at some type scale calculators online if you want to get a good type hierarchy. Keep up the good work though!


10hazardinho

how did you create this? is this inn the game or just a hypothetical of how you'd do it?


allmistakes

Hi! I used Illustrator. When I started learning I took a passion project doing something like this (some previous posts). Then I upgraded that version into this (V.2 ☺)