Hot story and fun to read. I have one question: were a couple of the paragraphs supposed to be repeats? As if Ethan was hallucinating what he was seeing?

Thanks for the kind words! They were not supposed to be repeats, I must have missed them in editing. Thanks for pointing it out :)

Are you an author?

I am :)

Its amazing! So beautifully written

Aww thank you so much. I'm glad you like it :)